From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Fri Dec 22 17:48:45 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B549EEA6C74; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 17:48:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8E1C380787; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 17:48:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id vBMHmiBp059304; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 17:48:44 GMT (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id vBMHmiUt059300; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 17:48:44 GMT (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: eadler set sender to eadler@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Eitan Adler Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2017 17:48:44 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: eadler X-SVN-Commit-Paths: in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 51330 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2017 17:48:45 -0000 Author: eadler Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 New Revision: 51330 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330 Log: multiple: fix a few typos - Duplicate words - change -> chance - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse some people) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ipv6/w6d.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/charter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/qa.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ipv6/w6d.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ipv6/w6d.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/ipv6/w6d.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) @@ -136,7 +136,7 @@

Why is IPv6 not enabled by default?

IPv6 has a mandatory link-local address. - In times where many people are are also using FreeBSD on their mobile + In times where many people are also using FreeBSD on their mobile computers and joining random networks the services they started would be accessible by other people on the same network. This may also happen if they only started the services for IPv4 and are not aware of IPv6 at Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) @@ -2688,7 +2688,7 @@ Qing Li and Tatuya Jinmei - Interview at at BSDCan with Qing Li and Tatuya + Interview at BSDCan with Qing Li and Tatuya Jinmei. We talk about the books that they authored with Keiichi Shima: "IPv6 Core Protocols Implementation" and "IPv6 Advanced Protocols Implementation." The @@ -12376,7 +12376,7 @@ of the project was a set of documents which identifies possible threats for the TCP and IP protocols and, where possible, proposes counter-measures to mitigate - the identified threats. This presentation will will + the identified threats. This presentation will describe some of the new insights that were gained as a result of this project. Additionally, it will provide an overview of the state of affairs of the @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@ on the system. One of the first problems presented to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply - tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will + tweaking the parameters and hoping that will help is not going to lead to good results. In our recent experiments we have used the top(1) program to measure our results. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/charter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/charter.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/charter.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@

  • -

    Work with the FreeBSD Security team to insure that security +

    Work with the FreeBSD Security team to ensure that security problems are indentified and handled in a timely fashion.

    • Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/qa.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/qa.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/portmgr/qa.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) @@ -161,8 +161,8 @@ two main categories:

    Remove expired ports. Ports that have been marked BROKEN for some time are marked DEPRECATED (with an EXPIRATION_DATE) and then are removed if no one has fixed them by that time. The intent of - this this process is to try to insure that if a user installs a port, - there is the best possible change that it can be made to work.

    + this process is to try to ensure that if a user installs a port, + there is the best possible chance that it can be made to work.

    In other cases, ports are marked DEPRECATED when they have been replaced by a newer version and the older version is no longer