From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Nov 12 12:20:56 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 121A416A4CE for ; Wed, 12 Nov 2003 12:20:56 -0800 (PST) Received: from shaft.techsupport.co.uk (shaft.techsupport.co.uk [212.250.77.214]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A7FAA43F85 for ; Wed, 12 Nov 2003 12:20:54 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from setantae@submonkey.net) Received: from cpc2-cdif3-6-0-cust204.cdif.cable.ntl.com ([81.103.67.204] helo=shrike.submonkey.net ident=mailnull) by shaft.techsupport.co.uk with esmtp (TLSv1:DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA:256) (Exim 4.24; FreeBSD 4.9) id 1AK1Tw-000MUA-TP; Wed, 12 Nov 2003 20:20:53 +0000 Received: from setantae by shrike.submonkey.net with local (Exim 4.24; FreeBSD 4.9) id 1AK1TS-000Fng-16; Wed, 12 Nov 2003 20:20:22 +0000 Date: Wed, 12 Nov 2003 20:20:21 +0000 From: Ceri Davies To: Wes Peters Message-ID: <20031112202021.GK60410@submonkey.net> Mail-Followup-To: Ceri Davies , Wes Peters , docs@freebsd.org References: <200311120953.35785.wes@softweyr.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="OgqxwSJOaUobr8KG" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <200311120953.35785.wes@softweyr.com> X-PGP: finger ceri@FreeBSD.org User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.4i Sender: Ceri Davies cc: docs@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Did I get this right? X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 12 Nov 2003 20:20:56 -0000 --OgqxwSJOaUobr8KG Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Wed, Nov 12, 2003 at 09:53:35AM -0800, Wes Peters wrote: > I added a section about CUPS, mostly cribbed from the pkg-descr, to the= =20 > handbook printing chapter. I'm pretty fuzzy with doc tools and such,=20 > and therefore need a thorough review. Please have at me over the=20 > attached diff, and thanks in advance. ;^) Hi Wes, Thanks for knocking this together, but just to be cruel I'm going to pick your patch apart - don't let it put you off ;-) > RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.= sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.81 > diff -u -w -u -w -r1.81 chapter.sgml > --- chapter.sgml 5 Nov 2003 10:36:55 -0000 1.81 > +++ chapter.sgml 12 Nov 2003 17:50:17 -0000 > @@ -4585,6 +4585,27 @@ > url=3D"http://www.lprng.org/">. > > > + > + CUPS > + > + CUPS =20 > + > + CUPS, the Common UNIX Printing > + System, provides a portable printing layer for UNIX-based > + operating systems. It has been developed by Easy Software ^ Two spaces here please. > + Products to promote a standard printing solution for all UNIX ^^^^ &unix; > + vendors and users. ^ One extra space here, please get rid. There should also be a new line between this and the next. > + CUPS uses the Internet Printing Protocol ("IPP") as the ^^^^^ IPP > + basis for managing print jobs and queues. The Line Printer ^ Add another space (last time I'll mention this, but it goes for the next occurrence too). > + Daemon ("LPD") Server Message Block ("SMB"), and AppSocket ^^^^^ ^^^^^ LPD, SMB > + (a.k.a. JetDirect) protocols are also supported with reduced > + functionality. CUPS adds network printer browsing and > + PostScript Printer Description ("PPD") based printing ^^^^^ PPD > + options to support real-world printing under UNIX. ^^^^ &unix; > + The main site for CUPS is + url=3D"http://www.cups.org/">. ^^ Two extra spaces here. > + > + ^ This whitespace looks funny, but I suspect you're just falling in line with the rest of the file, in which case it's ok. Thanks again, Ceri --=20 --OgqxwSJOaUobr8KG Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/spYFocfcwTS3JF8RAlAZAJ4mgJH4/rcC8+w/8eiGqlIuCsGjbwCfZqoB 5q1wHPinCUCL0l9jhJby+BU= =I9UI -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --OgqxwSJOaUobr8KG--