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From: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net>
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On Tue, Dec 07, 2004 at 07:28:34PM +0000, Hiten Pandya wrote:
> hmp         2004-12-07 19:28:34 UTC
>=20
>   FreeBSD doc repository
>=20
>   Modified files:
>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml=20
>   Log:
>   Correct last commit.
>  =20
>   Noticed by: trhodes, ceri

Thanks Hiten.  I still think the sentence is still backwards though.

> | @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
> |  	  discussing <acronym>MLS</acronym>.  A sensitivity level is
> |  	  a term used to describe how important or secret the data
> |  	  should be.  As the sensitivity level increases, so does the
> | -	  importance of the secrecy (or confidentiality) of the date.</para>
> | +	  importance of the secrecy, or confidentiality of the data.</para>

I think it should read:

As the confidentiality of the data or importance of the secrecy
increases, so does the sensitivity level.

Ceri
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Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm
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