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Date: Fri, 18 Sep 1998 11:55:21 +0200 (CEST)
From: Stefan Eggers <seggers@semyam.dinoco.de>
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Subject: docs/7975: camcontrol(8): Grammar error
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>Number:         7975
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       camcontrol(8): Grammar error
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Sep 18 11:20:04 PDT 1998
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Stefan Eggers
>Organization:
none
>Release:        FreeBSD 3.0-CURRENT i386
>Environment:

	-current sources cvsup'ed yesterday.

>Description:

	One of the sentences in the camcontrol(8) man page is not
correct regarding its grammar.  See below for what I think is not
right.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:
	
--- camcontrol.8.ORIG	Fri Sep 18 11:51:11 1998
+++ camcontrol.8	Fri Sep 18 11:52:14 1998
@@ -347,7 +347,7 @@
 flag) if the command fails.  Since error recovery is turned on, the
 disk will be spun up if it is not currently spinning.
 .Nm camcontrol
-will report whether or the disk is ready.
+will report whether the disk is ready or not.
 .Bd -literal -offset foobar
 camcontrol cmd -n cd -u 1 -v -c "3C 00 00 00 00 00 00 00 0e 00" \e
 	-i 0xe "s1 i3 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1 i1"
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:

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