From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Jan 19 14:48:08 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 6F755CAC for ; Sat, 19 Jan 2013 14:48:08 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from marc@blackend.org) Received: from smtp6-g21.free.fr (smtp6-g21.free.fr [IPv6:2a01:e0c:1:1599::15]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DB2B2E8B for ; Sat, 19 Jan 2013 14:48:06 +0000 (UTC) Received: from emphyrio.blackend.org (unknown [88.179.1.53]) by smtp6-g21.free.fr (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4940082294; Sat, 19 Jan 2013 15:47:58 +0100 (CET) Received: from emphyrio.blackend.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.14.5/8.14.4) with ESMTP id r0JElvKX001655; Sat, 19 Jan 2013 15:47:57 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc@emphyrio.blackend.org) Received: (from marc@localhost) by emphyrio.blackend.org (8.14.5/8.14.4/Submit) id r0JElvsx001654; Sat, 19 Jan 2013 15:47:57 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from marc) Date: Sat, 19 Jan 2013 15:47:57 +0100 From: Marc Fonvieille To: Dru Lavigne Subject: Re: [patch] content changes to X11 chapter Message-ID: <20130119144757.GA1597@emphyrio.blackend.org> References: <1358347186.30735.YahooMailClassic@web184905.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <1358347186.30735.YahooMailClassic@web184905.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> X-Useless-Header: blackend.org X-Operating-System: FreeBSD 8.3-STABLE User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.21 (2010-09-15) Cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 19 Jan 2013 14:48:08 -0000 On Wed, Jan 16, 2013 at 06:39:46AM -0800, Dru Lavigne wrote: > > Attached is a cleaned up diff. I've re-added the pre-requisite and > fixed the Crtl+Alt+F#. Marc, can you double-check that the > localization text you are looking for is incorporated into 6.8.2? If > that is not it, please quote me some of the missing text so I can > re-add it. > The text is in the diff, so it's Ok. You said that this diff is for the printed version, so maybe it will not be merged back as this. I think that things like http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x-understanding.html (I mean a modernized version) should be kept in the "official" handbook. This section explains concepts that newcomers will need to know to completely understand what is Xorg/X11. For example you removed the word "window manager" from the whole chapter, maybe it's Ok for the printed version but not for our handbook. Do you have a rendered version somewhere? -- Marc