From owner-freebsd-doc Sun Sep 22 11:30: 7 2002 Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2930337B401 for ; Sun, 22 Sep 2002 11:30:03 -0700 (PDT) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.21]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5DE3F43E6E for ; Sun, 22 Sep 2002 11:30:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id g8MIU2Co021314 for ; Sun, 22 Sep 2002 11:30:02 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id g8MIU2Jv021313; Sun, 22 Sep 2002 11:30:02 -0700 (PDT) Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id BFC0037B401 for ; Sun, 22 Sep 2002 11:21:19 -0700 (PDT) Received: from Kain.sumuk.de (Kain.sumuk.de [213.221.86.114]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D0AFD43E77 for ; Sun, 22 Sep 2002 11:21:15 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from vincent@Kain.sumuk.de) Received: from Kain.sumuk.de (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by Kain.sumuk.de (8.12.5/8.12.5) with ESMTP id g8MILFjv064455 for ; Sun, 22 Sep 2002 20:21:15 +0200 (CEST) (envelope-from vincent@Kain.sumuk.de) Received: (from vincent@localhost) by Kain.sumuk.de (8.12.5/8.12.5/Submit) id g8MILFxp064454; Sun, 22 Sep 2002 20:21:15 +0200 (CEST) Message-Id: <200209221821.g8MILFxp064454@Kain.sumuk.de> Date: Sun, 22 Sep 2002 20:21:15 +0200 (CEST) From: Martin Heinen Reply-To: Martin Heinen To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Subject: docs/43260: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.org >Number: 43260 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [PATCH] various fixes for ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun Sep 22 11:30:01 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Martin Heinen >Release: FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD Kain.sumuk.de 4.6-STABLE FreeBSD 4.6-STABLE #0: Mon Aug 12 13:45:36 CEST 2002 toor@Kain.sumuk.de:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/KAIN i386 >Description: - added full stops at the end of sentences, - change some markup, - CISCO -> Cisco, - replace & with 'and'. >How-To-Repeat: Read the chapter "PPP and SLIP". >Fix: Index: chapter.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /u/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.89 diff -u -r1.89 chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml 29 Aug 2002 10:35:52 -0000 1.89 +++ chapter.sgml 22 Sep 2002 15:44:27 -0000 @@ -324,30 +324,30 @@ &prompt.root; ppp - We have now started ppp + We have now started ppp. ppp ON example> set device /dev/cuaa1 We set our modem device, in this case it is - cuaa1 + cuaa1. ppp ON example> set speed 115200 Set the connection speed, in this case we - are using 115,200 kbps + are using 115,200 kbps. ppp ON example> enable dns Tell ppp to configure our resolver and add the nameserver lines to /etc/resolv.conf. If we ppp - cannot determine our hostname, we can set one manually later + cannot determine our hostname, we can set one manually later. ppp ON example> term - Switch to "terminal" mode so that we can manually - control the modem + Switch to terminal mode so that we can manually + control the modem. deflink: Entering terminal mode on /dev/cuaa1 @@ -359,7 +359,7 @@ Use at to initialize the modem, then use atdt and the number for your - ISP to begin the dial in process + ISP to begin the dial in process. CONNECT @@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ Here you are prompted for a username, return the prompt with the username that was provided by the - ISP + ISP. ISP Pass:mypassword @@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ PPP ON example> We have made an agreement on an IP - address and successfully completed our connection + address and successfully completed our connection. PPP ON example>add default HISADDR @@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ before we can talk to the outside world as currently the only established connection is with the peer. If this fails due to existing routes you can put a bang character - ! in front of the . + ! in front of the . Alternatively, you can set this before making the actual connection and it will negotiate a new route accordingly. @@ -701,7 +701,7 @@ You must enclose the phone number in quotation marks (") if there is any intention on using spaces in the phone number. This can cause a simple, yet - subtle error + subtle error. @@ -1559,7 +1559,7 @@ PPPclient Cisco The following /etc/ppp/options might be - used to connect to a CISCO terminal server PPP line. + used to connect to a Cisco terminal server PPP line. crtscts # enable hardware flow control modem # modem control line @@ -2403,7 +2410,7 @@ - Set the startup flags of sl0 by adding a + Set the startup flags of sl0 by adding a line: ifconfig_sl0="inet ${hostname} slip-gateway netmask 0xffffff00 up" @@ -2560,8 +2567,8 @@ Also, netstat -r will give the - routing table, in case you get the no route to - host messages from ping. An example shown here: + routing table, in case you get the no route to + host messages from ping. An example shown here: &prompt.root; netstat -r Routing tables @@ -2765,7 +2772,7 @@ the configuration for /usr/sbin/sliplogin (see &man.sliplogin.8; for the actual manual page for sliplogin): slip.hosts, - which defines the SLIP users & their associated IP + which defines the SLIP users and their associated IP addresses; slip.login, which usually just configures the SLIP interface; and (optionally) slip.logout, which undoes >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message