From owner-svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Aug 3 14:10:45 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [8.8.178.115]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CC77D727; Sat, 3 Aug 2013 14:10:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from wblock@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 9DD8C23D8; Sat, 3 Aug 2013 14:10:45 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.7) with ESMTP id r73EAjKl044920; Sat, 3 Aug 2013 14:10:45 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from wblock@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.7/8.14.5/Submit) id r73EAjDK044919; Sat, 3 Aug 2013 14:10:45 GMT (envelope-from wblock@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201308031410.r73EAjDK044919@svn.freebsd.org> From: Warren Block Date: Sat, 3 Aug 2013 14:10:45 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42491 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 03 Aug 2013 14:10:45 -0000 Author: wblock Date: Sat Aug 3 14:10:45 2013 New Revision: 42491 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42491 Log: Clarity and punctuation improvements. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sat Aug 3 13:33:20 2013 (r42490) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Sat Aug 3 14:10:45 2013 (r42491) @@ -379,7 +379,7 @@ Subversion can be installed from the &os; Ports - Collection, by issuing the following commands: + Collection by issuing these commands: &prompt.root; cd /usr/ports/devel/subversion &prompt.root; make clean install @@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ &os; Ports Tree Branches and Layout In svn+ssh://svn.freebsd.org/ports, - ports refers repository root of the + ports refers to the repository root of the ports tree. In general, most &os; port work will be done within @@ -710,8 +710,8 @@ It is possible to anonymously check out the &os; repository with Subversion. This will give access to a - read-only tree that can be updated, but not committed - to. To do this, use the following command: + read-only tree that can be updated, but not committed back + to the main repository. To do this, use the following command: &prompt.user; svn co https://svn0.us-west.FreeBSD.org/base/head /usr/src @@ -801,8 +801,8 @@ Most new source files should include a - $&os;$ string in the - new file. On commit, svn will expand + $&os;$ string near the start of the + file. On commit, svn will expand the $&os;$ string, adding the file path, revision number, date and time of commit, and the username of the committer. Files which