From owner-svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Jan 21 17:37:47 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B11BF2C8; Mon, 21 Jan 2013 17:37:47 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gabor@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A14D5168; Mon, 21 Jan 2013 17:37:47 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.70]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id r0LHblaw096244; Mon, 21 Jan 2013 17:37:47 GMT (envelope-from gabor@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from gabor@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id r0LHbYGt096162; Mon, 21 Jan 2013 17:37:34 GMT (envelope-from gabor@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201301211737.r0LHbYGt096162@svn.freebsd.org> From: Gabor Kovesdan Date: Mon, 21 Jan 2013 17:37:34 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r40699 - in projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1: articles/committers-guide articles/contributors articles/custom-gcc articles/freebsd-update-server articles/port-mentor-guidelines articl... X-SVN-Group: doc-projects MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for doc projects trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 21 Jan 2013 17:37:47 -0000 Author: gabor Date: Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 New Revision: 40699 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/40699 Log: - Make the English documentation valid XML Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.386bsd.xml projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.additional.xml projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.committers.xml projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.corealumni.xml 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projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook/book.xml Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -3843,7 +3843,7 @@ U stable/9/share/man/man4/netmap.4 specifically permitted by portmgr. Complete details about what qualifies as a sweeping change can be found on the Portmgr + url="&url.base;/portmgr/implementation.html">Portmgr Implementation page. The benefit of a slush as opposed to a complete Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.386bsd.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.386bsd.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.386bsd.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ - + Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.additional.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.additional.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.additional.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ - + Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.develalumni.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.develalumni.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.develalumni.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ - + Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.develinmemoriam.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.develinmemoriam.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/contributors/contrib.develinmemoriam.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ - + @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ John made major contributions to FreeBSD, the best known of which - is the import of the &man.dtrace.1 code. John's unique sense + is the import of the &man.dtrace.1; code. John's unique sense of humor and plain-spokenness either ruffled feathers or made him quick friends. At the end of his life, he had moved to a rural area and was attempting to live with Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/custom-gcc/article.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/custom-gcc/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/custom-gcc/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ binutils using the &os; ports tree, issue the following command: - &prompt.root; cd /usr/ports/devel/binutils && make install + &prompt.root; cd /usr/ports/devel/binutils && make install @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ GCC ports, run the following command: - &prompt.root; cd /usr/ports/lang/gcc44 && make install + &prompt.root; cd /usr/ports/lang/gcc44 && make install @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ /etc/make.conf file (or modify appropriately): - .if !empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/*) && exists(/usr/local/bin/gcc44) + .if !empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/*) && exists(/usr/local/bin/gcc44) CC=gcc44 CXX=g++44 CPP=cpp44 @@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ libstdc++.so.6 gcc44/libstdc++.so.6/etc/make.conf according to the following example: - .if !empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/*) && exists(/usr/local/bin/gcc44) + .if !empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/*) && exists(/usr/local/bin/gcc44) CC=gcc44 CXX=g++44 CPP=cpp44 @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ CFLAGS+=-mssse3 /etc/make.conf according to the following example: - .if !empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/*) && exists(/usr/local/bin/gcc44) + .if !empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/*) && exists(/usr/local/bin/gcc44) .if empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/net/openldap*) CC=gcc44 CXX=g++44 @@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ CPP=cpp44 net/openldap* ports. It is also possible to specify more ports on a single line: - .if empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/net/openldap*) && empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/xxx/yyy) && ... + .if empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/net/openldap*) && empty(.CURDIR:M/usr/ports/xxx/yyy) && ... Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -792,14 +792,14 @@ the new builds. # Build the world log "Building world" - cd /usr/src && - make -j 2 ${COMPATFLAGS} buildworld 2>&1 + cd /usr/src && + make -j 2 ${COMPATFLAGS} buildworld 2>&1 # Distribute the world log "Distributing world" - cd /usr/src/release && - make -j 2 obj && - make ${COMPATFLAGS} release.1 release.2 2>&1 + cd /usr/src/release && + make -j 2 obj && + make ${COMPATFLAGS} release.1 release.2 2>&1 Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/port-mentor-guidelines/article.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/port-mentor-guidelines/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/port-mentor-guidelines/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -127,8 +127,8 @@ We expect mentors to make sure their mentees read the Porter's Handbook, the PR handling guide, and - the Committer's + url="&url.articles.pr-guidelines;">PR handling guide, and + the Committer's Guide. While it's not necessary to memorize all the details, every committer needs to have an overview of these things to be an effective part of the community (and avoid as Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/portbuild/article.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ Many of the details in this article will be of interest only to - those on the Ports Management + those on the Ports Management team. @@ -2566,7 +2566,7 @@ cd /var/portbuild/arch - cd .ssh && ssh-keygen + cd .ssh && ssh-keygen Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/boot/chapter.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ - + - ]]> Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/arch-handbook/driverbasics/chapter.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ - + ]]> - - Use 2 Dashes - - There is a problem with producing the Postscript and PDF - versions of this document. The above example probably shows - just one hyphen symbol, - after the - <! and before the - >. - - You must use two - -, not one. The - Postscript and PDF versions have translated the two - - in the original to a longer, more - professional em-dash, and broken this - example in the process. - - The XHTML, plain text, and RTF versions of this document - are not affected. - - ]]> - If you have used XHTML before you may have been shown different rules for comments. In particular, you may think that the string <!-- opens a comment, and it is @@ -1357,7 +1335,7 @@ example.xml:5: element head: validity er As you would expect, being an XML construct, a marked - section starts with <!. + section starts with <!. The first square bracket begins to delimit the marked section. 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To clean up, use this command instead: - &prompt.root; rsync -rltvz --delete docsnap.sk.FreeBSD.org::docsnap/??_??\.\* /usr/share/doc + &prompt.root; rsync -rltvz ‐‐delete docsnap.sk.FreeBSD.org::docsnap/??_??\.\* /usr/share/doc If a subset of documentation needs to be updated, for example, the English documentation only, the following command @@ -1221,7 +1221,7 @@ Fetching 133 new ports or files... done. &prompt.root; rsync -rltvz docsnap.sk.FreeBSD.org::docsnap/en_US.ISO8859-1 /usr/share/doc -]]> +--> Modified: projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml Mon Jan 21 17:36:29 2013 (r40698) +++ projects/xml-tools/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.xml Mon Jan 21 17:37:33 2013 (r40699) @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ - +