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From: Sean Kelly <kelly@plutotech.com>
Subject: Re: docs/7975: camcontrol(8): Grammar error
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The following reply was made to PR docs/7975; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Sean Kelly <kelly@plutotech.com>
To: seggers@semyam.dinoco.de
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.ORG
Subject: Re: docs/7975: camcontrol(8): Grammar error
Date: Fri, 18 Sep 1998 16:08:41 -0600

 Stefan Eggers wrote:
 > -will report whether or the disk is ready.
 > +will report whether the disk is ready or not.
 
 "whether" implies that there is an "or not" case, so we should simplify
 it to just
 
 	will report whether the disk is ready.
 
 --Sean

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