From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Dec 22 09:07:38 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D1F3616A4CE; Wed, 22 Dec 2004 09:07:38 +0000 (GMT) Received: from vsmtp2.tin.it (vsmtp2alice.tin.it [212.216.176.142]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 23F5D43D1D; Wed, 22 Dec 2004 09:07:38 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from rionda@gufi.org) Received: from kaiser.sig11.org (82.54.177.188) by vsmtp2.tin.it (7.0.027) id 41C83A3900065CEE; Wed, 22 Dec 2004 10:07:37 +0100 Received: from localhost.localdomain (localhost [127.0.0.1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher RC4-MD5 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by kaiser.sig11.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AD44462D7; Wed, 22 Dec 2004 10:07:35 +0100 (CET) From: Matteo Riondato To: Giorgos Keramidas In-Reply-To: <20041221214640.GB1340@gothmog.gr> References: <1103658469.8516.53.camel@kaiser.sig11.org> <20041221214640.GB1340@gothmog.gr> Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="=-Crqdx5O4kxQZM86FJ6Tv" Date: Wed, 22 Dec 2004 10:07:34 +0100 Message-Id: <1103706454.84445.6.camel@kaiser.sig11.org> Mime-Version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Evolution 2.0.2 FreeBSD GNOME Team Port cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Explaination of an extract from the handbook Firewall Section X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list Reply-To: rionda@gufi.org List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 22 Dec 2004 09:07:38 -0000 --=-Crqdx5O4kxQZM86FJ6Tv Content-Type: text/plain Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > Hi, >=20 > Good catch. The nearby paragraphs use "the foo option _enables_ bar" > for describing kernel options. >=20 > Does the following change make this paragraph easier to understand? >=20 > % Index: chapter.sgml > % =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > % RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapt= er.sgml,v > % retrieving revision 1.10 > % diff -u -r1.10 chapter.sgml > % --- chapter.sgml 16 Dec 2004 22:45:35 -0000 1.10 > % +++ chapter.sgml 21 Dec 2004 21:44:11 -0000 > % @@ -245,8 +245,9 @@ > % device pflog > % device pfsync > % > % - device pf tells the compile to include > % - Packet Filter as part of its core kernel. > % + device pf enables support for the > % + Packet Filter firewall to the resulting > % + kernel. > % > % device pflog enables the optional > % &man.pflog.4; pseudo network device which can be used to log t= raffic Yes, now it's easier to understand (and translate..). Please note that there are similar obscurities in the IPF section too. (line 372-383 in same file) I would say that the whole firewall chapter is a bit obscure, so I will try to make it clearer and send patches here. Best Regards --=20 Rionda aka Matteo Riondato GUFI Staff Member (http://www.gufi.org) FreeSBIE Developer (http://www.freesbie.org) BSD-FAQ-it Main Developer (http://utenti.gufi.org/~rionda) Sent from: kaiser.sig11.org running FreeBSD-6.0-CURRENT --=-Crqdx5O4kxQZM86FJ6Tv Content-Type: application/pgp-signature; name=signature.asc Content-Description: Questa parte del messaggio =?ISO-8859-1?Q?=E8?= firmata -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.6 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQBByTlW2Mp4pR7Fa+wRArnNAKCDIexm+fdcLFdbUm50rdAekF3LSQCeK6nt TENdq38o08oBM61pGpn2mAw= =j37n -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --=-Crqdx5O4kxQZM86FJ6Tv--