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>Number:         34883
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Cleanup of the Developer's Handbook, chapter 1
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue Feb 12 10:50:02 PST 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Ceri <setantae@submonkey.net>
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Thu Feb 7 13:14:41 GMT 2002 setantae@rhadamanth.private.submonkey.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/RHADAMANTH i386


	
>Description:

Update some stuff now that /usr/src/crypto has stuff other than DES in it.
Also, fix some typos.

Ceri

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:


--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml.old	Tue Feb 12 17:25:40 2002
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/developers-handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml	Tue Feb 12 18:43:01 2002
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
       any other trade.  For some it is a hobby, for others it is their
       profession.  The information in this chapter might be more aimed
       towards the beginning programmer, but may also serve to be
-      useful for the programmer setting her first steps on the FreeBSD
+      useful for the programmer taking her first steps on the FreeBSD
       platform.</para>      
 
   </sect1>
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
     <para>The complete source code to FreeBSD is available from our
       public CVS repository.  The source code is normally installed in
       <filename class=directory>/usr/src</filename> which contains the
-      following subdirectories.</para>
+      following subdirectories:</para>
 
     <para>
       <informaltable frame="none">
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
 
 	    <row>
 	    <entry><filename class=directory>crypto/</filename></entry>
-	    <entry>DES source</entry>
+	    <entry>Cryptographical sources</entry>
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>
@@ -150,13 +150,13 @@
 	    <row>
 	    <entry><filename
  class=directory>kerberosIV/</filename></entry>
-            <entry>Source for Kerbereros version IV</entry>
+            <entry>Source for Kerberos version IV</entry>
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>
 	    <entry><filename
  class=directory>kerberos5/</filename></entry>
-            <entry>Source for Kerbereros version 5</entry>
+            <entry>Source for Kerberos version 5</entry>
 	    </row>
 
 	    <row>

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