Date: Fri, 26 Oct 2012 18:38:56 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r39813 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall Message-ID: <201210261838.q9QIcuX0065455@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Fri Oct 26 18:38:55 2012 New Revision: 39813 URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39813 Log: Refine the mention of freebsd-zfs partitions, and combine the mention of gpart(8) with the ZFS paragraph. Also expand a few contractions. Submitted by: Taras Korenko <ds@ukrhub.net> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Fri Oct 26 15:20:39 2012 (r39812) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Fri Oct 26 18:38:55 2012 (r39813) @@ -1195,7 +1195,6 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is there's the option of starting a shell where command-line programs like &man.gpart.8;, &man.fdisk.8;, and &man.bsdlabel.8; can be used directly.</para> - <!-- WB: mention ZFS here? --> <figure id="bsdinstall-part-guided-manual"> <title>Selecting Guided or Manual Partitioning</title> @@ -1401,16 +1400,18 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is </listitem> <listitem> - <para><literal>freebsd-zfs</literal> - A &os; ZFS - filesystem. See <xref linkend="filesystems-zfs"/>.</para> - </listitem> - - <listitem> <para><literal>freebsd-swap</literal> - &os; swap space.</para> </listitem> </itemizedlist> + <para>Another partition type worth noting is + <literal>freebsd-zfs</literal>, used for partitions that will + contain a &os; ZFS filesystem. See + <xref linkend="filesystems-zfs"/>. &man.gpart.8; shows more + of the available <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition + types.</para> + <para>Multiple filesystem partitions can be used, and some people may prefer a traditional layout with separate partitions for the <filename>/</filename>, @@ -1419,9 +1420,6 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an example.</para> - <para>See &man.gpart.8; for a complete list of available - <acronym>GPT</acronym> partition types.</para> - <para>Size may be entered with common abbreviations: <emphasis>K</emphasis> for kilobytes, <emphasis>M</emphasis> for megabytes, or <emphasis>G</emphasis> for gigabytes.</para> @@ -1731,7 +1729,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is found during the scan are listed, followed by a description of the encryption types available for that network. If the desired <acronym role="Service Set - Identifier">SSID</acronym> doesn't appear in the list, + Identifier">SSID</acronym> does not appear in the list, select <guibutton>[ Rescan ]</guibutton> to scan again. If the desired network still does not appear, check for problems with antenna connections or try moving the @@ -2019,7 +2017,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <para>Select <guibutton>[ Yes ]</guibutton> or <guibutton>[ No ]</guibutton> according to how the machine's clock is configured and press - <keycap>Enter</keycap>. If you don't know whether the system + <keycap>Enter</keycap>. If you do not know whether the system uses UTC or local time, select <guibutton>[ No ]</guibutton> to choose the more commonly-used local time.</para> @@ -2399,7 +2397,7 @@ Trying to mount root from cd9660:/dev/is <para>When the installation is complete, select <guibutton>[ Reboot ]</guibutton> to reboot the - computer and start the new &os; system. Don't forget to + computer and start the new &os; system. Do not forget to remove the &os; install CD, DVD, or USB memory stick, or the computer may boot from it again.</para> </sect2>
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