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From: Johan Karlsson <k@numeri.campus.luth.se>
To: Dag-Erling Smorgrav <des@ofug.org>
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Subject: Re: PR guidelines document
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Hi

I think it looks good.
Only two minor things, see the attached patch.

/Johan K 


On Thu, May 09, 2002 at 20:56 (+0200) +0000, Dag-Erling Smorgrav wrote:
> I've committed a [subject] in doc/en*/articles/pr-guidelines.  It
> should be on the website within twelve hours at the following URL:
> 
>     http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en/articles/pr-guidelines/
> 
> The article is mostly a summary of the discussions that took place on
> the old list early this year (or was it late last year?)  I'd like to
> hear everybody's comments and suggestions before I list it on the docs
> and news pages.
> 
> I'd like to thank Hiten Pandya for putting the article together and
> for his patience with yours procrastinatingly.
> 
> DES
> -- 
> Dag-Erling Smorgrav - des@ofug.org
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Index: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pr-guidelines/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pr-guidelines/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
--- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pr-guidelines/article.sgml	2002/05/09 12:28:53	1.1
+++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/pr-guidelines/article.sgml	2002/05/09 21:01:43
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>If the patch needs MFCing, Joe leaves the Problem Report
-	  in <quote>feedback</quote> state until the patch has been
+	  in <quote>patched</quote> state until the patch has been
 	  MFCed, then closes it.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -198,7 +198,7 @@
 
     <note>
       <para>The <quote>patched</quote> state is directly related to
-	feedback, in that you may go directly change to this state if
+	feedback, in that you may change to this state directly if
 	the originator cannot test the patch, given that it
 	works.</para>
     </note>

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