From owner-svn-src-head@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Nov 29 19:39:10 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-head@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A3D2A1065675 for ; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 19:39:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: from rv-out-0506.google.com (rv-out-0506.google.com [209.85.198.229]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7626A8FC13 for ; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 19:39:10 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from minimarmot@gmail.com) Received: by rv-out-0506.google.com with SMTP id b25so1777773rvf.43 for ; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 11:39:10 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:message-id:date:from:to :subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version:content-type :content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition:references; bh=6uPqG2tuv8XHkrKDUiCOeQ+9ymMVOEpQpwRZBMlyKgM=; b=wIlcVlV7lfLgt+w/z10R+14aVm/d4kZqgyRmi3lt+kftHsXuGPCf4huZdqVPtp/eW/ LOoucPJCIIrPOvhBkhk0p9GV/SEZYbqN34HBFOgTUO+Vr4BcRMB0e/uQT6BtATdbi87O YtSRtl9TfdA7jpl9tBzr9uvpHUVaiHGJIA+R4= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=message-id:date:from:to:subject:cc:in-reply-to:mime-version :content-type:content-transfer-encoding:content-disposition :references; b=J8QYggQXbmf1gGAIc1J3AoFwTnvScMaxwdDqvVrO1DDiVLLKvUsZa5BDK5tDjFltxd yOa8C94PVfWksuZyrdg6l26YQlhN+nnYhnfnyAsidefmwr4SPUFnKItonTCSI+Puufpb /Is9nbGfuh2YQ/CLJhOZCErOaentyB3ppLZhA= Received: by 10.143.31.11 with SMTP id i11mr3825535wfj.163.1227985564583; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 11:06:04 -0800 (PST) Received: by 10.143.60.4 with HTTP; Sat, 29 Nov 2008 11:06:04 -0800 (PST) Message-ID: <47d0403c0811291106v702257f6pd5bdc8257a8bf311@mail.gmail.com> Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 14:06:04 -0500 From: "Ben Kaduk" To: "Christian Brueffer" In-Reply-To: <200811291858.mATIwKej059716@svn.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Disposition: inline References: <200811291858.mATIwKej059716@svn.freebsd.org> Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r185448 - head/share/man/man4 X-BeenThere: svn-src-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the src tree for head/-current List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 29 Nov 2008 19:39:10 -0000 On Sat, Nov 29, 2008 at 1:58 PM, Christian Brueffer wrote: > Author: brueffer > Date: Sat Nov 29 18:58:20 2008 > New Revision: 185448 > URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/185448 > > Log: > Bring this a little closer to our manpage style. > > Modified: > head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 > > Modified: head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 > ============================================================================== > --- head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 Sat Nov 29 18:21:31 2008 (r185447) > +++ head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 Sat Nov 29 18:58:20 2008 (r185448) > @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ > .\" OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF > .\" SUCH DAMAGE. > .\" > -.Dd $Mdocdate: April 17 2008 $ > +.Dd April 17, 2008 > .Os > .Dt UPGT 4 > .Sh NAME > @@ -140,29 +140,43 @@ driver can be configured at runtime with > .\"users have to download these files on their own. > This driver requires the > .Nm upgtfw > -be installed before it will work. > +firmware be installed before it will work. At the risk of being a pedant, I think the grammar is not quite correct, here -- either "This driver requires that the upgtfw firmware be installed before it will work", or (my preference) "This driver requires the upgtfw firmware to be installed before it will work." -Ben Kaduk