From owner-svn-src-all@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Apr 30 07:01:32 2010 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-src-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id A45F01065670; Fri, 30 Apr 2010 07:01:32 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from delphij@gmail.com) Received: from mail-px0-f182.google.com (mail-px0-f182.google.com [209.85.212.182]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 61FB48FC14; Fri, 30 Apr 2010 07:01:32 +0000 (UTC) Received: by pxi17 with SMTP id 17so3969696pxi.13 for ; Fri, 30 Apr 2010 00:01:24 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=domainkey-signature:mime-version:received:received:in-reply-to :references:date:message-id:subject:from:to:cc:content-type :content-transfer-encoding; bh=FDMhZpdOv+h1kPLVagUF6F9iqXLm5q9mFTHsh6PXhRc=; b=ZqoxMy5j7XyNyrQMbjHS8FUfzspPFxZiVBhVfp4jLRSw1FfozI4wpwj3cCqqFr+Y+5 3Y8ObRMtEgb4w51Bcn+DZ8qxidHC2qNdcL8P6Wnq016ijQfGc/S9SO7D+SgTe/YDEFva FByM4Tk9Qay8q4IYTtEskTTonSfn3j7rUImyU= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=gamma; h=mime-version:in-reply-to:references:date:message-id:subject:from:to :cc:content-type:content-transfer-encoding; b=OZNjMkmVyEITUB2fl56C3VFIGciQnMEW8Pjy9sXztes9DkXX9QLl1JCuzZseQGDQkA 8+Cxv/xs1E3jlAEXi4iHfMIcV7IwDoWQiu63uHqi19zE+stixEyp7Q3i2teW00Gn1BvI fw5Whwi8HuezxHuJcLnEVeY2G9/FwGGyPQynw= MIME-Version: 1.0 Received: by 10.140.55.10 with SMTP id d10mr486717rva.247.1272610884340; Fri, 30 Apr 2010 00:01:24 -0700 (PDT) Received: by 10.140.169.10 with HTTP; Fri, 30 Apr 2010 00:01:23 -0700 (PDT) In-Reply-To: References: <201004271750.o3RHoi8G078883@svn.freebsd.org> Date: Fri, 30 Apr 2010 00:01:23 -0700 Message-ID: From: Xin LI To: Ben Kaduk Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org, Xin LI Subject: Re: svn commit: r207283 - head/usr.bin/gzip X-BeenThere: svn-src-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire src tree \(except for " user" and " projects" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 30 Apr 2010 07:01:32 -0000 Hi, Ben, On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 10:55 AM, Ben Kaduk wrote: > On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM, Xin LI wrote: >> Author: delphij >> Date: Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 >> New Revision: 207283 >> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207283 >> >> Log: >> =C2=A0Language improvements to make the BUGS section easier to read. >> >> =C2=A0Reviewed by: =C2=A0Alexander Best >> =C2=A0MFC after: =C2=A0 =C2=A013 days >> >> Modified: >> =C2=A0head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 >> >> Modified: head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 >> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D >> --- head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Tue Apr 27 15:59:38 2010 =C2= =A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0(r207282) >> +++ head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 =C2= =A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0(r207283) >> @@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ with unpack support written by >> =C2=A0.An Xin LI Aq delphij@FreeBSD.org . >> =C2=A0.Sh BUGS >> =C2=A0According to RFC 1952, the recorded file size is stored in a 32-bi= t >> -integer and therefore it can not represent files that is bigger than >> -4GB in size. =C2=A0This limitation also applies to >> +integer, therefore, it can not represent files larger than 4GB. >> +This limitation also applies to > > Still not quite right -- the old version was wrong because it had > "files that is" instead of "files that are". =C2=A0The new version has a > comma splice, though -- the comma in "32-bit integer, therefore" > should be replaced with either a semicolon or a full stop. > > I would probably also put in two "the"s in the text following this > change -- "the -l option" and "the gzip utility". I would appreciate some native English speaking committers to help me on this, I personally have no much strong opinion on the wording :-/ >> =C2=A0.Fl l >> =C2=A0option of >> =C2=A0.Nm >> _______________________________________________ >> svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list >> http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head >> To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >> > --=20 Xin LI http://www.delphij.net