From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Sat Dec 23 01:19:45 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1B801E8EFC4; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 01:19:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id CED656E07B; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 01:19:44 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id vBN1Jhjo049069; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 01:19:43 GMT (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id vBN1JhvF049068; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 01:19:43 GMT (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201712230119.vBN1JhvF049068@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: eadler set sender to eadler@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Eitan Adler Date: Sat, 23 Dec 2017 01:19:43 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r51332 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview X-SVN-Group: doc-head X-SVN-Commit-Author: eadler X-SVN-Commit-Paths: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview X-SVN-Commit-Revision: 51332 X-SVN-Commit-Repository: doc MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 23 Dec 2017 01:19:45 -0000 Author: eadler Date: Sat Dec 23 01:19:43 2017 New Revision: 51332 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51332 Log: FDP Primer: add missing word; pet igor PR: 224531 Submitted by: ljuba.bsd@gmail.com Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Fri Dec 22 19:44:54 2017 (r51331) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/overview/chapter.xml Sat Dec 23 01:19:43 2017 (r51332) @@ -74,8 +74,8 @@ documentation. First, subscribe to the &a.doc;. Some team members also interact on the #bsddocs IRC channel on - EFnet. These people - can help with questions or problems involving the + EFnet. These + people can help with questions or problems involving the documentation. @@ -86,9 +86,10 @@ This meta-package installs all of the software needed to edit and build &os; documentation. The Subversion package is needed to - obtain a working of the documentation and generate patches with. + obtain a working copy of the documentation and generate + patches with. - &prompt.root; pkg install docproj subversion + &prompt.root; pkg install docproj subversion @@ -222,7 +223,9 @@ Web site: This is the main &os; - presence on the web, visible at https://www.FreeBSD.org/ + presence on the web, visible at + https://www.FreeBSD.org/ and many mirrors around the world. The web site is typically a new user's first exposure to &os;. @@ -243,11 +246,13 @@ Documentation commit messages are visible with svn log. Commit messages are also - archived at &a.svn-doc-all.url;. + archived at + &a.svn-doc-all.url;. - Web frontends to both of these repositories are available at and . + Web frontends to both of these repositories are available + at + and . Many people have written tutorials or how-to articles about &os;. Some are stored as part of the FDP