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From: Dmitry Morozovsky <marck@rinet.ru>
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Subject: Re: Removing CIDR references (Was: Re: cvs commit:
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On Wed, 6 Dec 2006, Doug Barton wrote:

DB> >  	  <listitem>
DB> >  	    <para>The address block being used for this local area
DB> > -	      network is a Class C block
DB> > +	      network is a (historical) Class C block
DB> >  	      (<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0</hostid> -
DB> >  	      <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.255</hostid>).
DB> >  	      The default netmask is for a Class C network
DB> 
DB> network is <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0/24</hostid>, which
DB> encompasses the range from <hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.0</hostid>
DB> -<hostid role="ipaddr">192.168.0.255</hostid>).
DB> The default netmask for this network

This has been committed as ceri@ suggests, which looks more natural to me.

DB> >  	      for the <hostid role="ipaddr">203.14.101.0</hostid>
DB> > -	      class C via the client's ppp link.</para>
DB> > +	      /24 CIDR network via the client's ppp link.</para>
DB> 
DB> for the <hostid role="ipaddr">203.14.101.0/24</hostid>
DB> network via the client's ppp link.</para>

Fixed, thanks!

Sincerely,
D.Marck                                     [DM5020, MCK-RIPE, DM3-RIPN]
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