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>Number:         38568
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Minor improvements to PPPoA section
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun May 26 02:10:02 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Dominic Marks
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.6-RC i386
>Organization:
Student
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD 4.6-RC i386
	
>Description:
	In my latest update to the PPPoA section two minor errors sliped in.
	One was a label reverse-truncated by three characters. And a space
	in a command example went missing.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	NA.
	
>Fix:

Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.76
diff -u -r1.76 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	2002/05/19 11:14:02	1.76
+++ chapter.sgml	2002/05/26 08:54:15
@@ -2153,7 +2153,7 @@
       <programlisting>default:
     load adsl
 
-l:
+adsl:
     new -i ng0 adsl adsl
     set bundle authname <replaceable>username</replaceable> <co
     id="co-mpd-ex-user">
@@ -2200,7 +2200,7 @@
     <para>It is possible to initialise the connection easily by issuing the
       following command as <username>root</username>.</para>
 
-    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mpd -b</userinput><replaceable>adsl</replaceable></screen>
+    <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mpd -b</userinput> <replaceable>adsl</replaceable></screen>
 
     <para>You can see the status of the connection with the following
       command.</para>
	
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