From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Wed Jun 16 22:39:32 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 65BD016A4CE; Wed, 16 Jun 2004 22:39:32 +0000 (GMT) Received: from zaphod.nitro.dk (port324.ds1-khk.adsl.cybercity.dk [212.242.113.79]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 2386843D2F; Wed, 16 Jun 2004 22:39:32 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from simon@zaphod.nitro.dk) Received: by zaphod.nitro.dk (Postfix, from userid 3000) id BF0BB119CA; Thu, 17 Jun 2004 00:39:30 +0200 (CEST) Date: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 00:39:30 +0200 From: "Simon L. Nielsen" To: Tom Rhodes Message-ID: <20040616223930.GB2120@zaphod.nitro.dk> References: <20040616175315.3026d321@localhost.pittgoth.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="i9LlY+UWpKt15+FH" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <20040616175315.3026d321@localhost.pittgoth.com> User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.6i cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Update to my review request (New content and changes) X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 22:39:32 -0000 --i9LlY+UWpKt15+FH Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On 2004.06.16 17:53:15 -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: I only looked at the manual pages for now... > New manual pages: > cm.4 > .Bl -item -compact > .It > SMC90c26 > .It > SMC90c56 > .It > and SMC90c66 in '56 compatibility mode. s/and// - IMO since it's a list, not normal text. =2E.. >.Sh IMPLEMENTATION NOTES > The > .Dv IFF_LINK0 > flag is used to switch between > .Tn RFC 1051 > mode and > .Tn RFC > 1201 mode connectivity. > The default is > .Tn RFC > 1201, or category five cable with RFC is normally not marked up with Tn. There are also several other places where .Tn is used, where I at least wouldn't have done that. > esp.4 > and certain types of Parallel port hardware. Should that be capital P in Parallel ? > .Sh AUTHORS > This manual page was written by > .An Tom Rhodes Aq trhodes@FreeBSD.org > in place of porting the original from > .Nx . The "in place of" sounds a bit odd to me... In rc.4 there are a few long (>80 chars) lines. snc.4 also has a lot of .Tn uses... --=20 Simon L. Nielsen FreeBSD Documentation Team --i9LlY+UWpKt15+FH Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.4 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFA0Mwih9pcDSc1mlERArV5AKDB8eUteWxjRdjRdDxYoHx5HU4EHACePEU6 2EWi7saeoPs6SiM6d8C3lZk= =yqZh -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --i9LlY+UWpKt15+FH--