Date: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 00:39:30 +0200 From: "Simon L. Nielsen" <simon@FreeBSD.org> To: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: Update to my review request (New content and changes) Message-ID: <20040616223930.GB2120@zaphod.nitro.dk> In-Reply-To: <20040616175315.3026d321@localhost.pittgoth.com> References: <20040616175315.3026d321@localhost.pittgoth.com>
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--i9LlY+UWpKt15+FH Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On 2004.06.16 17:53:15 -0400, Tom Rhodes wrote: I only looked at the manual pages for now... > New manual pages: > cm.4 > .Bl -item -compact > .It > SMC90c26 > .It > SMC90c56 > .It > and SMC90c66 in '56 compatibility mode. s/and// - IMO since it's a list, not normal text. =2E.. >.Sh IMPLEMENTATION NOTES > The > .Dv IFF_LINK0 > flag is used to switch between > .Tn RFC 1051 > mode and > .Tn RFC > 1201 mode connectivity. > The default is > .Tn RFC > 1201, or category five cable with RFC is normally not marked up with Tn. There are also several other places where .Tn is used, where I at least wouldn't have done that. > esp.4 > and certain types of Parallel port hardware. Should that be capital P in Parallel ? > .Sh AUTHORS > This manual page was written by > .An Tom Rhodes Aq trhodes@FreeBSD.org > in place of porting the original from > .Nx . The "in place of" sounds a bit odd to me... In rc.4 there are a few long (>80 chars) lines. snc.4 also has a lot of .Tn uses... --=20 Simon L. Nielsen FreeBSD Documentation Team --i9LlY+UWpKt15+FH Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.4 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQFA0Mwih9pcDSc1mlERArV5AKDB8eUteWxjRdjRdDxYoHx5HU4EHACePEU6 2EWi7saeoPs6SiM6d8C3lZk= =yqZh -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --i9LlY+UWpKt15+FH--
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