From owner-cvs-all Sun Aug 26 20:38: 8 2001 Delivered-To: cvs-all@freebsd.org Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [216.136.204.21]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 94C2237B40C; Sun, 26 Aug 2001 20:37:57 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from bmah@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from bmah@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.11.4/8.11.4) id f7R3bvr05555; Sun, 26 Aug 2001 20:37:57 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from bmah) Message-Id: <200108270337.f7R3bvr05555@freefall.freebsd.org> From: "Bruce A. Mah" Date: Sun, 26 Aug 2001 20:37:57 -0700 (PDT) To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/alpha Makefile article.sgml src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common abstract.sgml install.ent install.sgml layout.sgml trouble.sgml upgrade.sgml floppies.sgml src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/i386 Makefile article.sgml X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Sender: owner-cvs-all@FreeBSD.ORG Precedence: bulk List-ID: List-Archive: (Web Archive) List-Help: (List Instructions) List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-Loop: FreeBSD.ORG bmah 2001/08/26 20:37:57 PDT Modified files: release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/alpha Makefile article.sgml release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common install.ent install.sgml layout.sgml trouble.sgml upgrade.sgml release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/i386 Makefile article.sgml Added files: release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common abstract.sgml Removed files: release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common floppies.sgml Log: Try to make some sense out of the mess that used to be INSTALL.TXT. 1. Bring floppies.sgml section in-line into install.sgml, where it makes more sense. 2. Slightly reorganize some sections of Installation section and do some wordsmithing. 3. Update distribution layout to reflect RELNOTESng and new compat distributions. 4. Update upgrade file list from 4-STABLE. 5. It's been a long time since 2.2.X; get rid of instructions dealing with "new" handling of compatability slices and fix up other references in the text. 6. Hunt down and kill emoticons with extreme prejudice. Try to tone down the use of exclamation points. 7. Cross-reference new and improved Installation chapter in Handbook. 8. Add a proper abstract for this document. Revision Changes Path 1.4 +2 -2 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/alpha/Makefile 1.2 +2 -2 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/alpha/article.sgml 1.2 +2 -2 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common/install.ent 1.7 +163 -68 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common/install.sgml 1.4 +41 -20 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common/layout.sgml 1.3 +7 -6 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common/trouble.sgml 1.3 +17 -70 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/common/upgrade.sgml 1.4 +2 -2 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/i386/Makefile 1.2 +2 -2 src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/installation/i386/article.sgml To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe cvs-all" in the body of the message