From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Tue May 28 18:20:59 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.FreeBSD.org [8.8.178.115]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id DD3FAEDB; Tue, 28 May 2013 18:20:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu [18.7.68.35]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4DBBAD27; Tue, 28 May 2013 18:20:59 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 12074423-b7f826d000001438-b3-51a4f458d33a Received: from mailhub-auth-2.mit.edu ( [18.7.62.36]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id 4E.03.05176.854F4A15; Tue, 28 May 2013 14:15:52 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-2.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r4SIFp58012964; Tue, 28 May 2013 14:15:52 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (SYSTEM-LOW-SIPB.MIT.EDU [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r4SIFnKx029912 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Tue, 28 May 2013 14:15:50 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r4SIFmCO019270; Tue, 28 May 2013 14:15:48 -0400 (EDT) Date: Tue, 28 May 2013 14:15:48 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Eitan Adler Subject: Re: svn commit: r41755 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction In-Reply-To: <201305272027.r4RKR3Bv045154@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201305272027.r4RKR3Bv045154@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; format=flowed; charset=US-ASCII X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrMIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixG6nohvxZUmgwdNj6hY/Ph5istj1dw6z xY1F+5ksdvf3MjuweMz4NJ8lgDGKyyYlNSezLLVI3y6BK+Pm7sfsBX/YKta1t7M0ML5k7WLk 5JAQMJE4cuMwG4QtJnHh3nogm4tDSGAfo8SuGZtYIZyNjBIPe25AZQ4xSRz7tJEZwmlglLjb /p0dpJ9FQFui6fU/RhCbTUBFYuabjWBzRYDs7/t/MoHYzAJREnuWNoLtFhYIkfjb9xysl1PA SqJhRzdYDa+Ag8Setm1gcSEBS4mbtx+DzREV0JFYvX8KC0SNoMTJmU9YIGZaSvxb+4t1AqPg LCSpWUhSCxiZVjHKpuRW6eYmZuYUpybrFicn5uWlFuma6eVmluilppRuYgSHrYvyDsY/B5UO MQpwMCrx8E7IXhwoxJpYVlyZe4hRkoNJSZTX7/OSQCG+pPyUyozE4oz4otKc1OJDjBIczEoi vJdWAuV4UxIrq1KL8mFS0hwsSuK811Ju+gsJpCeWpGanphakFsFkZTg4lCR4pUGGChalpqdW pGXmlCCkmTg4QYbzAA03BanhLS5IzC3OTIfIn2JUlBLnlQFJCIAkMkrz4HphaeUVozjQK8K8 /z8BVfEAUxJc9yugwUxAg8WZF4MMLklESEk1MK4TfunXdbRwDsuM86fdnLS8pNUa6vmbDM5N FHzyPKuu6Z+/6zF20SetrV1Peyz/n9FS2xG0tk845cG+KR1OT/7M2pdkzXrnXXLXXRVXRfv/ 38/rmAtKTnzZvmnF59Pvr517oRqjdL7latYTte7M5dP6WsN74id49hrsOFhgHLokYoZDjbid vhJLcUaioRZzUXEiAHE9y1cGAwAA Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 28 May 2013 18:20:59 -0000 On Mon, 27 May 2013, Eitan Adler wrote: > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Mon May 27 20:04:01 2013 (r41754) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml Mon May 27 20:27:03 2013 (r41755) > @@ -654,83 +644,13 @@ > + Since that time, &os; has made a series of releases each > + time improving the stability, speed, and feature set of the > + previous version. I don't think this is true, in particular I think that many sites considered 5.0 to be a regression (presumably due to the effects of Giant). It would probably be better to say that the series of releases strove to produce a modern, stable, and fast OS, or something similar. -Ben