From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri Sep 5 15:18:13 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B0E2116A4BF; Fri, 5 Sep 2003 15:18:13 -0700 (PDT) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (repoman.freebsd.org [216.136.204.115]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 48AF943FFD; Fri, 5 Sep 2003 15:18:13 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chern@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repoman.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6) with ESMTP id h85MIC0U065396; Fri, 5 Sep 2003 15:18:12 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from chern@repoman.freebsd.org) Received: (from chern@localhost) by repoman.freebsd.org (8.12.6/8.12.6/Submit) id h85MICD8065395; Fri, 5 Sep 2003 15:18:12 -0700 (PDT) Message-Id: <200309052218.h85MICD8065395@repoman.freebsd.org> From: Chern Lee Date: Fri, 5 Sep 2003 15:18:12 -0700 (PDT) To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org X-FreeBSD-CVS-Branch: HEAD Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 05 Sep 2003 22:18:13 -0000 chern 2003/09/05 15:18:12 PDT FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction chapter.sgml Log: - Remove a useless "see the next section" sentence, when the next section is two sentences away. - Update sparc64 to UltraSparc - Mention FreeBSD is also available on DVD - "hundreds of bug fixes" -> "thousands of bug fixes" (since 92) - Add a link to the Packages & Ports chapter after mentioning them - Rephrase a few sentences, remove a few unneeded words - Remove outdated comment about FreeBSD's "sane" installer - Remove version reference to documentation being on every FreeBSD 2.1 system and later Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc. Revision Changes Path 1.96 +23 -24 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.sgml