From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Tue Dec 15 18:16:49 2015 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4B854A43EA6; Tue, 15 Dec 2015 18:16:49 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from brueffer@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org (repo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:0]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 023F21A48; Tue, 15 Dec 2015 18:16:48 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from brueffer@FreeBSD.org) Received: from repo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.37]) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id tBFIGmZf036136; Tue, 15 Dec 2015 18:16:48 GMT (envelope-from brueffer@FreeBSD.org) Received: (from brueffer@localhost) by repo.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id tBFIGmuX036135; Tue, 15 Dec 2015 18:16:48 GMT (envelope-from brueffer@FreeBSD.org) Message-Id: <201512151816.tBFIGmuX036135@repo.freebsd.org> X-Authentication-Warning: repo.freebsd.org: brueffer set sender to brueffer@FreeBSD.org using -f From: Christian Brueffer Date: Tue, 15 Dec 2015 18:16:48 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r47864 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.20 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 15 Dec 2015 18:16:49 -0000 Author: brueffer Date: Tue Dec 15 18:16:47 2015 New Revision: 47864 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/47864 Log: Several minor wording, spelling and grammar improvements. PR: 204704 Submitted by: scottcheloha@gmail.com Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml Tue Dec 15 15:01:06 2015 (r47863) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/features.xml Tue Dec 15 18:16:47 2015 (r47864) @@ -33,10 +33,10 @@ of core router products, running root name servers, hosting major web sites, and as the foundation for widely used desktop operating systems. This is only possible because of the - diverse and world-wide membership of the + diverse and worldwide membership of the volunteer &os; Project.

-

&os; 10.X introduced many new features +

&os; 10.X introduces many new features and replaces many legacy tools with updated versions.

    @@ -105,16 +105,16 @@ CAPABILITY_MODE have been added to the GENERIC kernel.
  • Hhook: (Helper Hook) and khelp(9) (Kernel Helpers) - KPIs have been implemented. These are a superset of + KPIs have been implemented. These are a superset of the pfil(9) framework for more general use in the kernel. The hhook(9) KPI provides a way for kernel subsystems to export - hook points that khelp(9) modules can hook to provide + hook points that khelp(9) modules can hook into to provide enhanced or new functionality to the kernel. The khelp(9) KPI provides a framework for managing khelp(9) modules, which indirectly use the hhook(9) KPI to register their hook functions with hook points of interest within the kernel. - These allow a structured way to dynamically extend the - kernel at runtime in an ABI preserving manner.
    • + Together, they allow a structured way to dynamically extend the + kernel at runtime in an ABI-preserving manner.
  • Accounting API has been implemented. It can keep per-process, per-jail, and per-login class resource @@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ implementation and takes user-configurable actions based on the set of rules it maintains and the current resource usage. The rctl(8) utility has been added to manage the - rules in userland. Note that this is neither built nor + rules in userland. Note that this is neither built nor installed by default.
  • USB subsystem now supports USB packet filter.