From owner-svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Sat Dec 23 04:24:51 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-head@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 92371E97699; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 04:24:51 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-8.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-8.mit.edu [18.7.68.37]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 95FE8743B5; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 04:24:41 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) X-AuditID: 12074425-06fff7000000558f-80-5a3dda84ab0b Received: from mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.43]) (using TLS with cipher DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-8.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id 54.85.21903.48ADD3A5; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 23:24:37 -0500 (EST) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id vBN4OYS5012015; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 23:24:35 -0500 Received: from kduck.kaduk.org (24-107-191-124.dhcp.stls.mo.charter.com [24.107.191.124]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id vBN4OUPO020455 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Fri, 22 Dec 2017 23:24:33 -0500 Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2017 22:24:30 -0600 From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Eitan Adler Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.org, svn-doc-head@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr Message-ID: <20171223042430.GV39477@kduck.kaduk.org> References: <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Mutt/1.9.1 (2017-09-22) X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrDIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrdt6yzbKYOlnIYsfHw8xWez6O4fZ 4sai/UwWu/t7mR1YPGZ8ms8SwBjFZZOSmpNZllqkb5fAldH5cSNbwXfOinWbHzE2MH5j72Lk 5JAQMJH41fKbrYuRi0NIYDGTxNPdO9ghnI2MEkdanjFDOFeZJO5OO88M0sIioCrRc+0iE4jN JqAi0dB9GSwuAmR3vD0AFmcWiJJYveUkC4gtLBAtcbHtKdg6XqB1p9d8BasXErCSeLzhJCtE XFDi5MwnLBC9WhI3/r0EmsMBZEtLLP/HARLmFLCW+PHpGFiJqICyxN6+Q+wTGAVmIemehaR7 FkL3AkbmVYyyKblVurmJmTnFqcm6xcmJeXmpRboWermZJXqpKaWbGEEBy+6iuoNxzl+vQ4wC HIxKPLweCrZRQqyJZcWVuYcYJTmYlER5tVpsooT4kvJTKjMSizPii0pzUosPMUpwMCuJ8O4u AyrnTUmsrEotyodJSXOwKInzephoRwkJpCeWpGanphakFsFkZTg4lCR4BW4CNQoWpaanVqRl 5pQgpJk4OEGG8wAN5wCp4S0uSMwtzkyHyJ9i1OV4NvN1A7MQS15+XqqUOO/eG0BFAiBFGaV5 cHNAiUYie3/NK0ZxoLeEeXNARvEAkxTcpFdAS5iAlkwPsgZZUpKIkJJqYLQ9NGX+Od4TBeFx PFn5ib/O2WZu651czJ146Wer7k+r0h/3a494T7PkN1T6vKm83mLuXKE9feE/Vh5YyLpYbuYu RaMLig/N3SPq7t3UuOm67J9s9bpgoVdhSp/EHqukctgIaG0+GMm95pn7pm0/vFT/+Ja927x3 otHx2V827E63U75XnHRnepQSS3FGoqEWc1FxIgAqmantDwMAAA== X-BeenThere: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for the doc tree for head List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 23 Dec 2017 04:24:51 -0000 On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 05:48:44PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: > Author: eadler > Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 > New Revision: 51330 > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330 > > Log: > multiple: fix a few typos > > - Duplicate words > - change -> chance > - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse > some people) > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) > @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@ > on the system. One of the first problems presented > to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is > how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply > - tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will > + tweaking the parameters and hoping that will This "that that" was correct. I am travelling; can you fix it? -Ben > help is not going to lead to good results. In our > recent experiments we have used the top(1) program > to measure our results. >