Date: Wed, 27 Sep 2023 05:11:03 +0000 From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 255318] handbook: Document how to update the bootloader Message-ID: <bug-255318-9-s6NFtFKHV5@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/> In-Reply-To: <bug-255318-9@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/> References: <bug-255318-9@https.bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/>
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https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D255318 --- Comment #16 from Graham Perrin <grahamperrin@gmail.com> --- Created attachment 245266 --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=3D245266&action= =3Dedit A screenshot of proposed changes Re: comment 15 > =E2=80=A6 >=20 > a) =E2=80=A6 a warning, for readers to know that attention to an ESP migh= t be essential >=20 > * two warning boxes plus a note box might be overwhelming, =E2=80=A6 I opted for three note boxes, as shown in the window to the left.=20 (What's now the second box was previously a warning.) > b) =E2=80=A6 expanded, at least >=20 > * paraphrase the instruction to _stop_ using gpart(8) for ESP partitions >=20 > * refer directly to the EXAMPLES section of loader.efi(8) Shown in the window to the right.=20 First mentions of gpart(8) and loader.efi(8) are links to the manual pages.= =20 Second mentions =E2=80=93 adjacent, and nearly adjacent =E2=80=93 are inten= tionally not links. > * hint that if multiple ESPs exist, attention to more than one may be=20 > appropriate (mirrored disks, for example). I'll add this locally, then attach the .patch file in Bugzilla. --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are on the CC list for the bug.=
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