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Subject: [patch] fetch(1) typo ?
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Hi,

Suspected typo in fetch(1), also not sure if the
"will attempt to retrieve each of them in turn" should be
"will attempt to retrieve each one of them in turn".

Index: usr.bin/fetch/fetch.1
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
RCS file: /export/ctm/cvs/src/usr.bin/fetch/fetch.1,v
retrieving revision 1.66
diff -u -r1.66 fetch.1
--- usr.bin/fetch/fetch.1       13 Feb 2005 22:25:21 -0000      1.66
+++ usr.bin/fetch/fetch.1       21 Apr 2006 20:10:33 -0000
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@
 command returns zero on success, or one on failure.
 If multiple URLs are listed on the command line,
 .Nm
-will attempt to retrieve them each of them in turn, and return zero
+will attempt to retrieve each of them in turn, and return zero
 only if they were all successfully retrieved.
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr fetch 3


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"non-native" Pawel