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On Tue, Aug 30, 2011 at 7:41 AM, Warren Block <wblock@wonkity.com> wrote:
>
> Overall, looks quite good. =A0A few minor suggestions:
>
> 31.8.1
>
> =A0"5. Enable inetd"
> =A0 =A0 =A0Use &man.inetd.8; instead of plain "inetd". =A0Might be needed=
 for
> =A0 =A0 =A0other commands, or at least the first mention of them.
>
> =A0"11. Replace "myhost.mydomain.com" with the hostname"
> =A0 =A0 =A0Use <replaceable>myhost.example.com</replaceable>, maybe also =
use
> =A0 =A0 =A0it in the programlisting.
>
> =A0"14. Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR} in a chroot environment by"
> =A0 =A0 =A0Can be read three ways:
> =A0 =A0 =A0 1. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR}-in-a-chroot-environment by"
> =A0 =A0 =A0 2. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR}-in-a-chroot's environment by"
> =A0 =A0 =A0 3. "Customize the ${NFSROOTDIR} by using a chroot environment=
"
>
> =A0 =A0 =A0 Some rearrangement of that sentence could help.
>
> Thanks!
>

Hi,

Thanks.  I have incorporated your feedback and updated the page:

http://people.freebsd.org/~rodrigc/doc/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/n=
etwork-pxe-nfs.html

and the patch is here:

http://people.freebsd.org/~rodrigc/nfs-pxe.diff.txt

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Craig Rodrigues
rodrigc@crodrigues.org