From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Sun Nov 11 22:29:02 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id F19A1929; Sun, 11 Nov 2012 22:29:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from eadler@FreeBSD.org) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (svn.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:2068::e6a:0]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CB5798FC14; Sun, 11 Nov 2012 22:29:01 +0000 (UTC) Received: from svn.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5) with ESMTP id qABMT1fo009288; Sun, 11 Nov 2012 22:29:01 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org) Received: (from eadler@localhost) by svn.freebsd.org (8.14.5/8.14.5/Submit) id qABMT1il009287; Sun, 11 Nov 2012 22:29:01 GMT (envelope-from eadler@svn.freebsd.org) Message-Id: <201211112229.qABMT1il009287@svn.freebsd.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Sun, 11 Nov 2012 22:29:01 +0000 (UTC) To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r39981 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq X-SVN-Group: doc-head MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 11 Nov 2012 22:29:02 -0000 Author: eadler Date: Sun Nov 11 22:29:01 2012 New Revision: 39981 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39981 Log: Reduce redundant markup and word and other minor problems reported by igor. Limited additional checking was done of the surrounding content. Approved by: jkois (mentor, before merge conflict resolution) Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Sun Nov 11 21:42:32 2012 (r39980) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.xml Sun Nov 11 22:29:01 2012 (r39981) @@ -923,7 +923,7 @@ Where the format is html-split, the files are bundled up using &man.tar.1;. The resulting - .tar file is then compressed + .tar is then compressed using the compression schemes detailed in the next point. @@ -986,9 +986,9 @@ appropriate documents into place. For example, the split HTML version of the FAQ, - compressed using &man.bzip2.1;, can be found in the + compressed using &man.bzip2.1;, can be found in doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.html-split.tar.bz2 - file. To download and uncompress that file you would have + To download and uncompress that file you would have to do this. &prompt.root; fetch ftp://ftp.FreeBSD.org/pub/FreeBSD/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.html-split.tar.bz2 @@ -2241,7 +2241,7 @@ drive. See &man.burncd.8; for details. &os; also supports any SCSI CD-R or CD-RW drives. - Install and use the cdrecord command + Install and use cdrecord from the ports or packages system, and make sure that you have the pass device compiled in your kernel. @@ -2766,8 +2766,8 @@ quit This is usually caused by an interrupt conflict (e.g., - two boards using the same IRQ). Boot with the - option and change the + two boards using the same IRQ). Boot with + and change the ed0/de0/... entry to match your board. @@ -3420,9 +3420,9 @@ chip1@pci0:31:5: class=0x040100 c /etc/resolv.conf. This will often cause a delay in SSH, as the option UseDNS is set to - yes by default in the - sshd_config file in - /etc/ssh. If this is causing the + yes by default in + /etc/ssh/sshd_config. + If this is causing the problem, you will either need to fill in the missing information in /etc/resolv.conf or set UseDNS to no in @@ -3455,7 +3455,7 @@ chip1@pci0:31:5: class=0x040100 c MAX_STRAY_LOG from 5 to 0 in your platform's (e.g., &i386;) - intr_machdep.c file and rebuild the + intr_machdep.c and rebuild the new kernel and all the warnings will be suppressed. @@ -3643,7 +3643,7 @@ kern.timecounter.hardware: TSC -> i82 Enter &man.sysinstall.8; and choose Configure, then Fdisk. Select the disk the Boot - Manager resided on with the Space key. + Manager resided on with Space. Press W to write changes to the drive. A prompt will appear asking which boot loader to install. Select this, and it will be restored. @@ -4439,8 +4439,8 @@ device sio5 at isa? port 0x2b8 tty flags used to build the currently running system (e.g., you are compiling &rel.current;-RELEASE on a &rel2.current;-RELEASE system). If you are attempting - an upgrade, please read the - /usr/src/UPDATING file, paying + an upgrade, please read + /usr/src/UPDATING, paying particular attention to the COMMON ITEMS section at the end. @@ -4697,8 +4697,8 @@ kern.sched.name: ULE When you are slicing up your disk, check that the disk geometry displayed in the FDISK screen is correct (i.e., it - matches the BIOS numbers); if it is wrong, use the - G key to fix it. You may have to do this + matches the BIOS numbers); if it is wrong, use + G to fix it. You may have to do this if there is absolutely nothing on the disk, or if the disk has been moved from another system. Note that this is only an issue with the disk that you are going to boot from; &os; @@ -4965,7 +4965,7 @@ use "disklabel -r" to install initial la DOS/&windowsnt; partition. Assuming you name that file something like c:\bootsect.bsd (inspired by c:\bootsect.dos), you can - then edit the c:\boot.ini file to come + then edit c:\boot.ini to come up with something like this: [boot loader] @@ -5461,7 +5461,7 @@ C:\="DOS" Avail columns, usually by a factor of 8%. - For more details, look up the option + For more details, look up in &man.tunefs.8;. @@ -5520,8 +5520,8 @@ C:\="DOS" Why do I keep getting messages like root: not - found after editing my - crontab file? + found after editing + /etc/crontab @@ -5933,7 +5933,8 @@ options SYSVMSG # enable for The error comes from the Kerberos distributed authentication system. The problem is not fatal but annoying. You can - either run su with the option, or + either run su with , + or uninstall Kerberos as described in the next question. @@ -6529,8 +6530,8 @@ EndSection are running or to read your mail while waiting for an FTP transfer to finish. Just do AltF2 - (hold down the Alt key and press the - F2 key), and you will find a login prompt + (hold down Alt and press + F2), and you will find a login prompt waiting for you on the second virtual console! When you want to go back to the original session, do It is imperative that you completely shut down X Window if it is running, before running this command. If you do not, your system will probably appear to hang or lock up after - executing the kill command. + executing kill. @@ -6665,8 +6666,8 @@ ttyvb "/usr/libexec/getty Pc" server. If loaded from &man.rc.8;, xdm should - be started without any arguments (i.e., as a daemon). The - xdm command must start + be started without any arguments (i.e., as a daemon). + xdm must start after &man.getty.8; runs, or else getty and xdm will conflict, locking out the console. The best way around this @@ -6677,9 +6678,8 @@ ttyvb "/usr/libexec/getty Pc" /etc/ttys, there still is a chance of conflict between xdm and &man.getty.8;. One way to avoid this is to add the vt - number in the - /usr/local/lib/X11/xdm/Xservers - file: + number in + /usr/local/lib/X11/xdm/Xservers :0 local /usr/local/bin/X vt4 @@ -7878,11 +7878,11 @@ default 10.0.0.2 UG 10.0.0.2 10.0.0.1 UH 0 0 tun0 This is assuming that you have used the addresses from - the handbook, the manual page, or from the - ppp.conf.sample file. If you do not + the handbook, the manual page, or from + ppp.conf.sample. If you do not have a default route, it may be because you forgot to add - the HISADDR line to the - ppp.conf file. + the HISADDR line to + ppp.conf. Another reason for the default route line being missing is that you have mistakenly set up a default router in your @@ -7906,8 +7906,7 @@ default 10.0.0.2 UG This error is usually due that the following section is - missing in your /etc/ppp/ppp.linkup - file: + missing in your /etc/ppp/ppp.linkup: MYADDR: delete ALL @@ -8386,7 +8385,7 @@ set dfilter 3 permit 0/0 0/0-bd -q30m, telling it to run the queue every 30 minutes) or until a sendmail is done (perhaps from your - ppp.linkup file). + ppp.linkup). @@ -8741,8 +8740,8 @@ ATDT1234567 if the incoming data is actually a login or shell prompt. If you have a shell prompt at the remote end, it is possible to terminate &man.ppp.8; without dropping the line by using - the close lcp command (a following - term command) will reconnect you to the + close lcp (a following + term) will reconnect you to the shell on the remote machine. If nothing in your log file indicates why the link might @@ -8762,7 +8761,7 @@ ATDT1234567 If all else fails, send as much information as you can, including your config files, how you are starting &man.ppp.8;, the relevant parts of your log file and the - output of the netstat -rn command (before + output of netstat -rn (before and after connecting) to the &a.questions; or the comp.unix.bsd.freebsd.misc news group, and someone should point you in the right @@ -9054,12 +9053,12 @@ hint.sio.7.irq="12" When changing modes of the file hierarchies rooted in the files instead of the files themselves, you have to use either or - together with the - option to make this work. See the &man.chmod.1; and - &man.symlink.7; manual pages for more info. + together with + to make this work. See &man.chmod.1; and + &man.symlink.7; for more information. - The option does a + does a recursive &man.chmod.1;. Be careful about specifying directories or symlinks to directories to &man.chmod.1;. If you want to change the permissions of a