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From: Tom Hukins <tom@FreeBSD.org>
Subject: Re: docs/48366: Update to Dialup firewalling with FreeBSD...
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The following reply was made to PR docs/48366; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: Tom Hukins <tom@FreeBSD.org>
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Subject: Re: docs/48366: Update to Dialup firewalling with FreeBSD...
Date: Tue, 18 Feb 2003 06:49:40 +0000

 I have a few comments on what looks like a useful patch:
 
 On Mon, Feb 17, 2003 at 02:47:47AM -0800, Sean Chittenden wrote:
 > +	  <para>Enables the new version of IPFW.</para>
 > +	  <important><para>Only do this if you're running FreeBSD 4.X,
 > +	  this is the default in newer versions of
 > +	  FreeBSD.</para></important>
 
 These a re two separate clauses, so a semicolon or full stop would be
 more appropriate after "4.X".
 
 > -    <para>If so, you will need to specifically disable 
 > +    <para>If so, you will need to specifically disable
 
 In addition, s/will need/need/.
 
 > -    <title>The ruleset for the firewall</title>
 > +    <title>The rule set for the firewall</title>
 
 I notice we use "ruleset" and "rule set" inconsistently through doc
 and www - I agree that we should prefer "rule set".
 
 Tom

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