From owner-svn-doc-all@FreeBSD.ORG Mon Nov 12 23:14:08 2012 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AFBACCDD; Mon, 12 Nov 2012 23:14:08 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-1.mit.edu (DMZ-MAILSEC-SCANNER-1.MIT.EDU [18.9.25.12]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0CFD78FC12; Mon, 12 Nov 2012 23:14:07 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 1209190c-b7f286d000000ee3-14-50a182be2fb9 Received: from mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu ( [18.9.21.43]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-1.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id 07.F6.03811.EB281A05; Mon, 12 Nov 2012 18:14:06 -0500 (EST) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (OUTGOING-AUTH.MIT.EDU [18.7.22.103]) by mailhub-auth-3.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id qACNE6DN017732; Mon, 12 Nov 2012 18:14:06 -0500 Received: from multics.mit.edu (SYSTEM-LOW-SIPB.MIT.EDU [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.6/8.12.4) with ESMTP id qACNE4ji010168 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Mon, 12 Nov 2012 18:14:05 -0500 (EST) Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id qACNE32E004080; Mon, 12 Nov 2012 18:14:03 -0500 (EST) Date: Mon, 12 Nov 2012 18:14:03 -0500 (EST) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: Eitan Adler Subject: Re: svn commit: r39981 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq In-Reply-To: Message-ID: References: <201211112229.qABMT1il009287@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrEIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixCmqrbuvaWGAwZmFNhY/Ph5istj1dw6z xY1F+5ksdvf3MjuweMz4NJ8lgDGKyyYlNSezLLVI3y6BK2Pxm2amgvncFRNm97E2MB7h6GLk 5JAQMJG4vqGXHcIWk7hwbz0biC0ksI9R4tK2qC5GLiB7A6PE2dk9rBDOCSaJPV0djBBVDYwS 3/apg9gsAtoSj15eBouzCahIzHyzEWySCJD9ff9PJhCbWSBKYs/SRlYQW1jAQWLxjwawek6B QIm5ez6xgNi8QPGD996xQyzbzCjx4vpksPNEBXQkVu+fAlUkKHFy5hMWiKGWEuf+XGebwCg4 C0lqFpLUAkamVYyyKblVurmJmTnFqcm6xcmJeXmpRbqGermZJXqpKaWbGMFBK8mzg/HNQaVD jAIcjEo8vDddFgYIsSaWFVfmHmKU5GBSEuUtrwQK8SXlp1RmJBZnxBeV5qQWH2KU4GBWEuE1 rwfK8aYkVlalFuXDpKQ5WJTEeS+n3PQXEkhPLEnNTk0tSC2CycpwcChJ8FY0AjUKFqWmp1ak ZeaUIKSZODhBhvMADc8FqeEtLkjMLc5Mh8ifYlSUEuctAUkIgCQySvPgemFJ5RWjONArwrxd IFU8wIQE1/0KaDAT0OD12xaADC5JREhJNTDufhDrN6Vm47+iOYtWrjfJXxYtX14cbTjxUraq ofSDC1ol36Ywf2E68PNrguXSullvnk/+75I38XHp/QoN7kXbaydkJ21/13xmou2Sc91fd80/ dlUuw15OUTXMdpWP3R2tScWnVcKD5+07sOra4SfLczincgdIttwMji5cvKR/wfJdLbtOHyhP UWIpzkg01GIuKk4EAFnXSu0FAwAA Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 12 Nov 2012 23:14:08 -0000 On Mon, 12 Nov 2012, Eitan Adler wrote: > On 12 November 2012 14:58, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > >>> - the close lcp command (a following >>> - term command) will reconnect you to the >>> + close lcp (a following >>> + term) will reconnect you to the >> >> >> I have trouble making sense of this sentence; perhaps the close paren is >> misplaced? Not a bug in your change, but I would have expected it to be >> noticed in pre-commit review. > > Note the commit message: ""Limited additional checking was done of the > surrounding content."" I did see that, yes. > I noticed quite a few things, but few of which I felt I wanted to fix > in this iteration. Hopefully nothing gets lost; with a lot of changes pending to this file it could be exciting. >>> >>> - The option does a >>> + does a >> >> >> My understanding was that we did not like to start sentences with markup. > > I did not know this. Can you propose some alternative wording? Well, it may not be a fully settled point; possibly someone else wants to chime in on the matter. As far as rewording, I would try "Using causes &man.chmod.1 to act recursively." -Ben