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On 12/11/2012 11:08 AM, Benedict Reuschling wrote:
>
> Am 10.12.12 16:16, schrieb Bas Smeelen:
>>
>> Patch is attached and maybe this can then be maintained as xml and
>> eventually being moved over to the handbook.
>>
>>
> Hello Bas,
>
> thanks for sending the patch. With a few minor style corrections to it,
> I will update the article. If you find out anything more related to
> laptops that should be included, feel free to send a PR.
>
> Including this article as a handbook chapter might be worth discussing.
> But for now, keeping it separate should suffice.
>
> Regards
>
> Benedict Reuschling
> FreeBSD Documentation Committer

Hello Benedict,

I ran over the locally patched xml with textproc/igor (thanks to Warren 
Block) and also I misplaced <programlisting> tags inside <para> tags and 
some other things.
The existing xml file also has this kind of stuff and make does not complain 
about this.

When committed I will go over whitespace changes etc...

And after that I will look for additions and/or changes with my home laptop.
Things like shutdown, reboot, etc in XFCE would also be worth adding I guess?


Thanks!