From nobody Fri Nov 10 04:09:31 2023 X-Original-To: dev-commits-doc-all@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4SRQLz58Ldz50tFt for ; Fri, 10 Nov 2023 04:09:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4SRQLz4B7hz3cwG; Fri, 10 Nov 2023 04:09:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1699589371; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=YAEbxgMV2nk9NjfkzzliDOaaNKOu1CRkNbkEmjs3plg=; b=KhYOPSs9yJUeoJLNp7x1iVoPYCqeedDtY6hgvkkt0UR6VvtPr2L7jhHZ2Xm0d/HLDLmiaV b6tsPfn5+Lh9lzPo9mHTP7jgm+j6WgirzxeluzTLlMzCxt8o0VrGzACFOaWf2jt/xWY/+4 KWs4fMX+7OWc94v3+COhPW0C0naH14v73uxOVrb4p1QhiMuZa+vfVQ02tVv0mD90gHFYIh ica8y1sfMND+dbOhcCfJoF3Sp8kYdRSgqhvhlwFEqgmvfV4P1TUYI8Ay/bGja+o1wAu3Jt A1JIJSFty9Srpgd6Lssbrm4qrQZswzZ/zln7teJsIcC8lRRMsN7mc/v2L8Rs6A== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1699589371; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=YAEbxgMV2nk9NjfkzzliDOaaNKOu1CRkNbkEmjs3plg=; b=ph9G7peOgwgpjHLKlN1hEK3EqeSSYVvAkXgx0RUjjDaQoT9M5JHTHqn/nl5DGIDGJv8/Gl 62pkneK2sYeGd63Qr3H4TE+0+9V36RuozUUkdUiY9XxIK0TM99sD7PmcA2YHO5HSckxLgY wPpG327aZRfsNsZAJHInbSdC8OiMtvnOYm+2d/l6qPcH8pVquTU8Q8NzPxcnJHNqRJ9mk6 fxxvzN/COhz3p3S/hLUinOjjrKjs6gH/npxRS4GlL9aBT6psz0MDmXnUYLI9vkypk8Exhv IGixCTQIOX7gJ1VK+htlkqanUPHOOTtnKia42QXrBYDI4QPCgj4rGMEx1R1cZA== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1699589371; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=GwcNCDMtk/++/2+aEyICn1mNU+G1f3T+eG3QuUgx+5QNR2CTSIPcWVdYLgQ8Dm/NE8+eDr /x+YAF76XDm81wNwhwSHYfj5wYWeILXkaapvdXMZLqCT1SFGv4a9ot2nWh31n/73xQXojB 1oEBTNmHX39iZDrYh2fQ1N0XvTFp9pYMcAYfQPY733z9LZmNOKNko2VHUIOuyOKVGVXz9k pbi9CJP1xg6JyVSrFo6OqUMPRRBXx9138G+KKvJX+TWc7CqNiuUUfIi+urruilIa9aw3D4 PNHXfBKKGRIlRg8k5i/h3/qC0CHZ88wm8D99A1KEgchtK5s0lSPZYNHIZ0vvQA== Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org (gitrepo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:5]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4SRQLz3FHqzjhQ; Fri, 10 Nov 2023 04:09:31 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.44]) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.17.1/8.17.1) with ESMTP id 3AA49VrT018227; Fri, 10 Nov 2023 04:09:31 GMT (envelope-from git@gitrepo.freebsd.org) Received: (from git@localhost) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.17.1/8.17.1/Submit) id 3AA49VsK018223; Fri, 10 Nov 2023 04:09:31 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Fri, 10 Nov 2023 04:09:31 GMT Message-Id: <202311100409.3AA49VsK018223@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org From: Mike Karels Subject: git: be6792fbea - main - 14.0 relnotes: wording changes List-Id: Commit messages for all branches of the doc repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-doc-all List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Git-Committer: karels X-Git-Repository: doc X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/main X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Commit: be6792fbead272001865bf1d6deed463ee12cedd Auto-Submitted: auto-generated The branch main has been updated by karels: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=be6792fbead272001865bf1d6deed463ee12cedd commit be6792fbead272001865bf1d6deed463ee12cedd Author: Mike Karels AuthorDate: 2023-11-10 04:07:29 +0000 Commit: Mike Karels CommitDate: 2023-11-10 04:09:21 +0000 14.0 relnotes: wording changes Clarify a couple of items; from suggestions by grahamperrin@gmail.com. Remove a commented-out line that shouldn't be there any longer. --- website/content/en/releases/14.0R/relnotes.adoc | 5 ++--- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/relnotes.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/relnotes.adoc index 76857497c7..9f6efbce65 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/relnotes.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/relnotes.adoc @@ -67,13 +67,12 @@ There are one or more copies of the boot loader on the MS-DOS EFI System Partiti After a system upgrade, but before doing a `zpool upgrade`, the boot loader on the ESP must be updated, or the system may become unbootable. The location of the boot loader in use can be determined using the command `efibootmgr -v`. The value displayed for `BootCurrent` should be the number of the current boot configuration used to boot the system. -The corresponding line of the output should begin with a `+` sign, such as +The corresponding entry of the output should begin with a `+` sign, such as +Boot0000* FreeBSD HD(1,GPT,f859c46d-19ee-4e40-8975-3ad1ab00ac09,0x800,0x82000)/File(\EFI\freebsd\loader.efi) nda0p1:/EFI/freebsd/loader.efi (null) The ESP may already be mounted on [.filename]#/boot/efi#. -//If not, a `noauto` entry may be in the man:fstab[5] file; this allows the command `mount /boot/efi` to mount the file system. Otherwise, the partition may be mounted manually, using the partition listed in the `efibootmgr` output (`nda0p1` in this case): `mount_msdosfs /dev/nda0p1 /boot/efi`. See man:loader.efi[8] for another example. @@ -399,7 +398,7 @@ gitref:a8b89dff6ac0[repository=src] man:boottrace[4] is a new kernel-userspace interface for capturing trace events during system boot and shutdown. Event annotations are present in the boot and shutdown paths in the kernel; system utilities (man:init[8], man:shutdown[8], man:reboot[8]); and man:rc[8] scripts (via man:boottrace[8]). -This facility focuses on ease of use and is aimed primarily at system administrators. +man:boottrace[4] focuses on ease of use and is aimed primarily at system administrators. It is available in the default `GENERIC` kernel and can be enabled by toggling a man:sysctl[8] variable. gitref:da5b7e90e740[repository=src] gitref:5a8fceb3bd9f[repository=src] gitref:7b0a665d72c0[repository=src] gitref:13ec1e3155c7[repository=src] gitref:318d0db5fe8a[repository=src] gitref:1ae2c59bcf21[repository=src] (Sponsored by NetApp, Inc.) (Sponsored by Klara, Inc)