From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Mon May 10 23:30:39 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5E20A16A4CE; Mon, 10 May 2004 23:30:39 -0700 (PDT) Received: from vader.aacc.edu (vader.aacc.cc.md.us [12.167.138.28]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id C886543D58; Mon, 10 May 2004 23:30:38 -0700 (PDT) (envelope-from fox@vader.aacc.cc.md.us) Received: from vader.aacc.edu (IDENT:v2KV9hsfpowLT/PG+34CIyM7chOCGrir@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by vader.aacc.edu (8.12.8/8.12.8) with ESMTP id i4B6UXuU003145; Tue, 11 May 2004 02:30:33 -0400 Received: from localhost (fox@localhost) by vader.aacc.edu (8.12.8/8.12.8/Submit) with ESMTP id i4B6UW2A003141; Tue, 11 May 2004 02:30:32 -0400 X-Authentication-Warning: vader.aacc.edu: fox owned process doing -bs Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 02:30:32 -0400 (EDT) From: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Michel_Lavond=E8s?= X-X-Sender: fox@vader.aacc.edu To: Warren Block In-Reply-To: <20040510170909.A8661@wonkity.com> Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8BIT cc: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org cc: freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/66481: [patch] share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING tyops X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 11 May 2004 06:30:39 -0000 On Mon, 10 May 2004, Warren Block wrote: > On Mon, 10 May 2004, Michel Lavondès wrote: > > > --- share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING.orig Wed May 5 09:17:25 2004 > > +++ share/examples/diskless/README.TEMPLATING Wed May 5 09:19:47 2004 > > > - it descending into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions > > + it descends into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions > ^^ > The "on" should be removed. I don't think so. The whole sentence reads as follows: * The program accesses a file called .cpignore in each directory it descends into on the source to obtain a list of exceptions for that directory -- that is, files not to copy or mess with. Perhaps it could be reworded as "each directory of the source [tree] into which it descends", but this is (IMHO) a matter of taste, and I'd rather not get involved in those. -- "I'd ask if you'd found the right sort of isolated wasteland for your citadel of dread yet, but that would be a silly question; you're in Utah, after all." --ESR to Darl McBride (Chief Excessive Ossifier of Squandered Clues Obstination), in http://www.catb.org/~esr/writings/mcbride.html