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Author: eadler (src,ports committer)
Date: Thu Aug  9 15:16:38 2012
New Revision: 39344
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/39344

Log:
  Simplify sentence a bit
  
  Approved by:	bcr

Modified:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml

Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
==============================================================================
--- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml	Thu Aug  9 15:16:36 2012	(r39343)
+++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml	Thu Aug  9 15:16:38 2012	(r39344)
@@ -5204,7 +5204,7 @@ use "disklabel -r" to install initial la
 	      <term>ZFS</term>
 
 	      <listitem>
-		<para>As of this writing, &os; includes a port of
+		<para>&os; includes a port of
 		  &sun;'s ZFS driver.  The current recommendation is to
 		  use it only on &arch.amd64; platforms with sufficient
 		  memory.  For more information, see &man.zfs.8;.</para>