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From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
Date: Wed, 23 Jun 2004 11:21:50 +0000 (UTC)
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ceri        2004-06-23 11:21:50 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/relaydelay article.sgml 
  Log:
  Rain on Tom's article, like I promised ;-)
  
  o Some minor grammatical and spelling corrections
  o Add some comments where I think improvements are desirable, but the
    initial intent was not clear to me.
  o Correct a URL
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.2       +16 -13    doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/relaydelay/article.sgml