From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Nov 13 09:55:13 2003 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5221D16A4CE for ; Thu, 13 Nov 2003 09:55:13 -0800 (PST) Received: from shaft.techsupport.co.uk (shaft.techsupport.co.uk [212.250.77.214]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1A3E643FDF for ; Thu, 13 Nov 2003 09:55:12 -0800 (PST) (envelope-from setantae@submonkey.net) Received: from cpc2-cdif3-6-0-cust204.cdif.cable.ntl.com ([81.103.67.204] helo=shrike.submonkey.net ident=mailnull) by shaft.techsupport.co.uk with esmtp (TLSv1:DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA:256) (Exim 4.24; FreeBSD 4.9) id 1AKLgR-000AtU-P4; Thu, 13 Nov 2003 17:55:08 +0000 Received: from setantae by shrike.submonkey.net with local (Exim 4.24; FreeBSD 4.9) id 1AKLgI-0001Bc-Bk; Thu, 13 Nov 2003 17:54:58 +0000 Date: Thu, 13 Nov 2003 17:54:58 +0000 From: Ceri Davies To: Wes Peters Message-ID: <20031113175458.GS60410@submonkey.net> Mail-Followup-To: Ceri Davies , Wes Peters , docs@freebsd.org References: <200311120953.35785.wes@softweyr.com> <20031112202021.GK60410@submonkey.net> <200311130834.48467.wes@softweyr.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/signed; micalg=pgp-sha1; protocol="application/pgp-signature"; boundary="tvOENZuN7d6HfOWU" Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <200311130834.48467.wes@softweyr.com> X-PGP: finger ceri@FreeBSD.org User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.4i Sender: Ceri Davies cc: docs@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Did I get this right? X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 13 Nov 2003 17:55:13 -0000 --tvOENZuN7d6HfOWU Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Thu, Nov 13, 2003 at 08:34:48AM -0800, Wes Peters wrote: > On Wednesday 12 November 2003 12:20, Ceri Davies wrote: > > On Wed, Nov 12, 2003 at 09:53:35AM -0800, Wes Peters wrote: > > > I added a section about CUPS, mostly cribbed from the pkg-descr, to > > > the handbook printing chapter. I'm pretty fuzzy with doc tools and > > > such, and therefore need a thorough review. Please have at me over > > > the attached diff, and thanks in advance. ;^) > > > > Hi Wes, > > > > Thanks for knocking this together, but just to be cruel I'm going to > > pick your patch apart - don't let it put you off ;-) >=20 > No, thanks for the review. Sometimes just knowing what to look for is=20 > half the challenge. Attached you will find my second attempt with all=20 > the problems you noted fixed, plus an additional I=20 > spotted as I was editing. Thanks! Looks good for committing, but I still have a couple of whitespace nits, I'm afraid, which are inline below. > Index: chapter.sgml > =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D > RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.= sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.81 > diff -u -w -u -w -r1.81 chapter.sgml > --- chapter.sgml 5 Nov 2003 10:36:55 -0000 1.81 > +++ chapter.sgml 13 Nov 2003 16:32:54 -0000 > @@ -4585,6 +4585,29 @@ > url=3D"http://www.lprng.org/">. > > > + > + CUPS > + > + CUPS =20 > + > + CUPS, the Common UNIX Printing > + System, provides a portable printing layer for &unix;-based > + operating systems. It has been developed by Easy Software > + Products to promote a standard printing solution for all &unix; > + vendors and users. > + CUPS uses the Internet Printing Please add another newline between and . > + Protocol (IPP) as the basis for managing > + print jobs and queues. The Line Printer Daemon ^ Add another space. > + (LPD) Server Message Block > + (SMB), and AppSocket (a.k.a. JetDirect) > + protocols are also supported with reduced functionality. CUPS > + adds network printer browsing and PostScript Printer Description > + (PPD) based printing options to support > + real-world printing under &unix;. > + The main site for CUPS is . That's it, cheers. Ceri --=20 --tvOENZuN7d6HfOWU Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/s8VyocfcwTS3JF8RAjNMAKCA7dmIXoBPe6fYSWGMoysbKtTdSQCbBTax QD95o6zHP4CtLThBhyZXeMc= =9I51 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --tvOENZuN7d6HfOWU--