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Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2002 09:39:18 -0400
To: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com>
Subject: Re: docs/40910: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for
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At 2:10 AM -0700 2002/07/23, Ceri Davies wrote:
>The following reply was made to PR docs/40910; it has been noted by GNATS.
>
>From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
>To: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu>
>Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
>Subject: Re: docs/40910: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for 
>/usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz
>Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2002 10:07:20 +0100
>
>  On Mon, Jul 22, 2002 at 10:52:01PM -0400, Chris Pepper said:
>  >
>  > >Description:
>  >	The moused man page has typos & grammar errors.
>
>  Hi Chris,
>
>  Just two comments on this patch.
>
>  >  If the mouse daemon receives the signal
>  >  .Dv SIGHUP ,
>  > -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
>  > -Useful if
>  > +it reopens the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
>  > +This is useful if
>  >  the mouse is attached/detached while the system is suspended.
>
>  I'd prefer :
>
>   If the mouse daemon receives the signal
>   .Dv SIGHUP ,
>   -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself.
>   -Useful if
>   +it will reopen the mouse port and reinitialize itself.
>   +This is useful if
>
>  Comments ?
>
>  Everything else in this PR looks good to me.

	That looks good to me as well.


						Chris
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