From owner-cvs-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Tue Dec 7 21:13:40 2004 Return-Path: Delivered-To: cvs-doc@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.FreeBSD.org (mx1.freebsd.org [216.136.204.125]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id AF2A316A4CE; Tue, 7 Dec 2004 21:13:40 +0000 (GMT) Received: from fledge.watson.org (fledge.watson.org [204.156.12.50]) by mx1.FreeBSD.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5270E43D5C; Tue, 7 Dec 2004 21:13:40 +0000 (GMT) (envelope-from hmp@freebsd.org) Received: from fledge.watson.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by fledge.watson.org (8.13.1/8.13.1) with ESMTP id iB7LBFEc078695; Tue, 7 Dec 2004 16:11:15 -0500 (EST) (envelope-from hmp@freebsd.org) Received: from localhost (hmp@localhost)iB7LBFJP078692; Tue, 7 Dec 2004 16:11:15 -0500 (EST) (envelope-from hmp@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: fledge.watson.org: hmp owned process doing -bs Date: Tue, 7 Dec 2004 16:11:15 -0500 (EST) From: Hiten Pandya X-Sender: hmp@fledge.watson.org To: Ceri Davies In-Reply-To: <20041207210237.GQ513@submonkey.net> Message-ID: MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org cc: cvs-doc@freebsd.org cc: cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml X-BeenThere: cvs-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.1 Precedence: list List-Id: CVS commit messages for the doc and www trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 07 Dec 2004 21:13:40 -0000 That's even better, I will make the change shortly. Thanks Ceri and Tom! Hiten Pandya hmp at freebsd.org On Tue, 7 Dec 2004, Ceri Davies wrote: :On Tue, Dec 07, 2004 at 07:28:34PM +0000, Hiten Pandya wrote: :> hmp 2004-12-07 19:28:34 UTC :> :> FreeBSD doc repository :> :> Modified files: :> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml :> Log: :> Correct last commit. :> :> Noticed by: trhodes, ceri : :Thanks Hiten. I still think the sentence is still backwards though. : :> | @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ :> | discussing MLS. A sensitivity level is :> | a term used to describe how important or secret the data :> | should be. As the sensitivity level increases, so does the :> | - importance of the secrecy (or confidentiality) of the date. :> | + importance of the secrecy, or confidentiality of the data. : :I think it should read: : :As the confidentiality of the data or importance of the secrecy :increases, so does the sensitivity level. : :Ceri :-- :Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm :not sure about the former. -- Einstein (attrib.) :