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Author: gjb (doc committer)
Date: Sun Feb 27 17:30:45 2011
New Revision: 219087
URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/219087

Log:
  MFC 212498:
  
  Rewording and typo fixes in newfs(8).
  
  PR:		150490

Modified:
  stable/8/sbin/newfs/newfs.8
Directory Properties:
  stable/8/sbin/newfs/   (props changed)

Modified: stable/8/sbin/newfs/newfs.8
==============================================================================
--- stable/8/sbin/newfs/newfs.8	Sun Feb 27 17:14:06 2011	(r219086)
+++ stable/8/sbin/newfs/newfs.8	Sun Feb 27 17:30:45 2011	(r219087)
@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@ The following options define the general
 Erase the content of the disk before making the filesystem.
 The reserved area in front of the superblock (for bootcode) will not be erased.
 
-This is a relevant option for flash based storage devices that use
-wear levelling algorithms.
+This option is only relevant for flash based storage devices that use
+wear-leveling algorithms.
 
-NB: Erasing may take as long time as writing every sector on the disk.
+Erasing may take a long time as it writes to every sector on the disk.
 .It Fl J
 Enable journaling on the new file system via gjournal.
 See