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From: Adam Weinberger <adamw@FreeBSD.org>
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adamw       2005-11-06 19:06:23 UTC

  FreeBSD doc repository

  Modified files:
    en/gnome             news.xml 
  Log:
  Fix spacing, tweak wording to improve sentence flow, and add a note about
  using the upgrade script.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.108     +7 -4      www/en/gnome/news.xml