From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Jan 10 22:20:07 2008 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D0CB416A468 for ; Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:20:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B6A3113C4D1 for ; Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:20:07 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.2/8.14.2) with ESMTP id m0AMK2Rk038685 for ; Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:20:02 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.2/8.14.1/Submit) id m0AMK2Q9038684; Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:20:02 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:20:02 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200801102220.m0AMK2Q9038684@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Marcin Cieslak Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id CC9D216A418 for ; Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:13:51 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from saper@saper.info) Received: from system.pl (system.pl [87.98.232.30]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 351F913C465 for ; Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:13:50 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from saper@saper.info) Received: (qmail 27693 invoked from network); 10 Jan 2008 22:45:17 +0100 Received: from unknown (HELO radziecki.saper.info) (81.210.234.246) by system.pl with (DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA encrypted) SMTP; 10 Jan 2008 22:45:17 +0100 Received: from radziecki.saper.info (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by radziecki.saper.info (8.14.2/8.14.2) with ESMTP id m0ALi0YL025158 for ; Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:44:00 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from saper@localhost.saper.info) Received: (from saper@localhost) by radziecki.saper.info (8.14.2/8.14.2/Submit) id m0ALi0Ui025144; Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:44:00 +0100 (CET) (envelope-from saper) Message-Id: <200801102144.m0ALi0Ui025144@radziecki.saper.info> Date: Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:44:00 +0100 (CET) From: Marcin Cieslak To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/119545: books/arch-handbook/usb/chapter.sgml formatting X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: Marcin Cieslak List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:20:07 -0000 >Number: 119545 >Category: docs >Synopsis: books/arch-handbook/usb/chapter.sgml formatting >Confidential: no >Severity: serious >Priority: medium >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Jan 10 22:20:02 UTC 2008 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marcin Cieslak >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-PRERELEASE amd64 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD radziecki.saper.info 7.0-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 7.0-PRERELEASE #7: Sun Jan 6 03:23:21 CET 2008 saper@radziecki.saper.info:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/VAIO amd64 >Description: The USB chapter of the Architecture Handbook contains some strange markup: 1) Missing reference [ 2] in "Access to these registers is provided through a virtualised hub as suggested in the USB specification [ 2]" 2) In the OCHI chapter: typo "to which aqueue of transfer descriptors" should probably be "to which a queue ..." 3) In the OHCI chapter: framelist interruptisochronous control bulk Should this be some form of a graph? 3) In the "Device Information chapter": Level 0 Level 1 Level 2 Slot 0 Slot 3 Slot 2 Slot 1 (Only 4 out of 32 slots shown) Another graphing attempt? >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Difficult to fix (except for 2) without knowing original author's intent. >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: