From owner-svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.ORG Thu Oct 3 03:15:15 2013 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) (using TLSv1 with cipher ADH-AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 84025443; Thu, 3 Oct 2013 03:15:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@mit.edu) Received: from dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu (dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu [18.7.68.35]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 295CE2CEE; Thu, 3 Oct 2013 03:15:14 +0000 (UTC) X-AuditID: 12074423-b7fc98e0000009a2-35-524ce00f61ad Received: from mailhub-auth-2.mit.edu ( [18.7.62.36]) by dmz-mailsec-scanner-6.mit.edu (Symantec Messaging Gateway) with SMTP id B9.8C.02466.F00EC425; Wed, 2 Oct 2013 23:10:08 -0400 (EDT) Received: from outgoing.mit.edu (outgoing-auth-1.mit.edu [18.9.28.11]) by mailhub-auth-2.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.9.2) with ESMTP id r933A6dS010292; Wed, 2 Oct 2013 23:10:07 -0400 Received: from multics.mit.edu (system-low-sipb.mit.edu [18.187.2.37]) (authenticated bits=56) (User authenticated as kaduk@ATHENA.MIT.EDU) by outgoing.mit.edu (8.13.8/8.12.4) with ESMTP id r933A4or004217 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=DHE-RSA-AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT); Wed, 2 Oct 2013 23:10:05 -0400 Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by multics.mit.edu (8.12.9.20060308) id r933A4sm023622; Wed, 2 Oct 2013 23:10:04 -0400 (EDT) Date: Wed, 2 Oct 2013 23:10:04 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk To: freebsd@allanjude.com Subject: Re: svn commit: r42807 - projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs In-Reply-To: <201310021753.r92HrmFV064157@svn.freebsd.org> Message-ID: References: <201310021753.r92HrmFV064157@svn.freebsd.org> User-Agent: Alpine 1.10 (GSO 962 2008-03-14) MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: TEXT/PLAIN; charset=US-ASCII; format=flowed X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFvrEIsWRmVeSWpSXmKPExsUixG6noivwwCfI4OcpJosfHw8xWZw+cpnZ YuGZ1cwOzB4f3v1n9JjxaT5LAFMUl01Kak5mWWqRvl0CV8bzDfvZCo7yVbR+mc7YwPibu4uR k0NCwESiff8mZghbTOLCvfVsXYxcHEIC+xglTq1byg7hbGCUWP79CxOEc5BJ4uuEnawgLUIC 9RKLJh9kB7FZBLQkvrzaBRZnE1CRmPlmIxuILSIgKbHm93awFcwCNhITHiwAqxcWSJDY+vkL WA2ngJXE1v3XwGxeAUeJ5vtfGCHmW0psffQPzBYV0JFYvX8KC0SNoMTJmU9YIGZaSpz7c51t AqPgLCSpWUhSCxiZVjHKpuRW6eYmZuYUpybrFicn5uWlFuma6eVmluilppRuYgQHrYvyDsY/ B5UOMQpwMCrx8Boq+QQJsSaWFVfmHmKU5GBSEuVdfw8oxJeUn1KZkVicEV9UmpNafIhRgoNZ SYR38UqgHG9KYmVValE+TEqag0VJnPcWh32QkEB6YklqdmpqQWoRTFaGg0NJgnfyfaBGwaLU 9NSKtMycEoQ0EwcnyHAeoOHqIDW8xQWJucWZ6RD5U4yKUuK82SAJAZBERmkeXC8sqbxiFAd6 RZi3AaSKB5iQ4LpfAQ1mAhr8eoknyOCSRISUVAOj/4QPf6MqNzzdkPYw0LZr42Y+PvkMldNz dgowby/zOHJugqm78IO42alcRwxcXV9VrEh4ueWJ+Qw/C9YNl0IMahWP6X8TWzp7WYabiNDf bW335hoo//Ltkvoj8E1hg0mKc7d27XNuXo4H7k//BK8+NnvqSbefJRd/zhDbEM7c+Xgf07G6 g15nlFiKMxINtZiLihMBRG+dAAUDAAA= Cc: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.14 Precedence: list List-Id: SVN commit messages for doc projects trees List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 03 Oct 2013 03:15:15 -0000 On Wed, 2 Oct 2013, Benedict Reuschling wrote: > Author: bcr > Date: Wed Oct 2 17:53:48 2013 > New Revision: 42807 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42807 > > Log: > Add basic information about ZFS delegation and small corrections to other > parts. > > Submitted by: Allan Jude > > Modified: > projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml > > Modified: projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Wed Oct 2 16:19:37 2013 (r42806) > +++ projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Wed Oct 2 17:53:48 2013 (r42807) > A volume can be formatted with any filesystem on top of > - it. This will appear to the user as if they are working with > - that specific filesystem and not ZFS. This way, it can be > - used to augment non-ZFS filesystems with ZFS features that > - they do not have. For example, combining the ZFS compression > - property together with a 250 MB volume allows to create a > - compressed FAT filesystem. > + it. This will appear to the user as if they are working with > + a regular disk using that specific filesystem and not ZFS. > + In this way, non-ZFS file systems can be augmented with > + ZFS features that they would not normally have. For example, > + combining the ZFS compression property together with a > + 250 MB volume allows to create a compressed FAT > + filesystem. This last sentence seems to be incorrect grammar, as the verb "allows" requires a direct object, as in "allows the user to create". It's probably better to just rewrite it as "allows creation of", though. -Ben