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Ken Smith <kensmith@cse.Buffalo.EDU> wrote:
> On Sun, Nov 16, 2003 at 01:28:39PM -0500, Joe Marcus Clarke wrote:
> 
> > Yeah, that's fine.  Thanks!
> 
> How's this?  It's viewable in a very stripped-down web version at:
> 
> http://www.cse.buffalo.edu/~kensmith/FreeBSD/cluster_article.html
> 
> if you want to see it.  Lost of the support files are missing so it
> will look much better once integrated on the main web site.

[sgml code]

hi i had a short glimps on your sgml markup and i noticed
you wrote 4.x and 5.x instead of 4.X and 5.X as it should be marked
up following the fdp-primer.

as the sgml code was inline in the email body i was not able to do a
diff, so i just write this short mail.

greets, josef