From nobody Sat Apr 29 16:26:45 2023 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4Q7vxf2xb4z47xby for ; Sat, 29 Apr 2023 16:26:46 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4Q7vxd388Cz4V2c for ; Sat, 29 Apr 2023 16:26:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1682785605; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=ZTlTVCKW/WpB+L6uBUbGnotaO9j48Qg0YAk1+GP6oWU=; b=h7yqLK70dHf1zer+v8iGEAa7LPfxct5r0HxA4Btc7hC6yK+MRxpjORuemvXTMaJZ7DcEz+ 7mYjYJXLLonPH9nWLOoOuzdWdk0FZE6rzVGD1CLG6bJD1i158uFxOcsat5qKm2v0dWNmhF hdCg5mcFBE9mnMJG1WF+YTWF6ouRH3Zr9KdItdC1JhjSdYgkAtMFYI4bSfgTnMKtHDyE3Q gYvaP90yGqHmPhuDg7PIy5q/qJI192kNlitdXAplIKgiMPtVlkji12A7WQHdslYi4K0g3v 3VKrPnKNcxr4oK7S06R2+8OySS9qelMsqk3PGcru3vWPGVHwPCO7q84e0wjbJg== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1682785605; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=SVbfU+1RNUE057qS34P4GXK5mYBQh5fV19enVFtgpAJpc5zCO74mDOXd4KhFdIbrZmQ+B4 vg4GrVD285vxQbJLjdxcrngZ14hYj5H3FsU3r7eZH1p+qyiFAPrY4cIOWzcxyuoi/6GXN+ 5pIlUbUQAMWwyvysegXRhi/4EMYLdI2ZKV8rLKkESYOkIRhA3erdJCY6sKmaBq7gtmKtfv 0VT/VWWrMW6EQPnDDuyM+usThiWdNYgc7xwWbXCyIAMR9OsX3P5kA6xG4/EWth+x8MfBjy WMzL+C5rtrTaJ0u0HbkyHND0y47IvbQzDlGUjHudjceeEN/2FUTE8uGOCxYVUg== Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4Q7vxd26p2zpbY for ; Sat, 29 Apr 2023 16:26:45 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 33TGQj9T021956 for ; Sat, 29 Apr 2023 16:26:45 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 33TGQjJl021955 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Sat, 29 Apr 2023 16:26:45 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 271134] bhyve(8) manual page cleanup Date: Sat, 29 Apr 2023 16:26:45 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: CC X-Bugzilla-Type: new X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Manual Pages X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Some People X-Bugzilla-Who: grahamperrin@freebsd.org X-Bugzilla-Status: New X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: bugs@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: bug_id short_desc product version rep_platform op_sys bug_status bug_severity priority component assigned_to reporter cc Message-ID: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D271134 Bug ID: 271134 Summary: bhyve(8) manual page cleanup Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any OS: Any Status: New Severity: Affects Some People Priority: --- Component: Manual Pages Assignee: bugs@FreeBSD.org Reporter: grahamperrin@freebsd.org CC: doc@FreeBSD.org the first paragraph under EXAMPLES is not an example:=20 > If not using a boot ROM, the guest operating system must have been loaded= =20 > with bhyveload(8) or a similar boot loader before bhyve(4) can be run.=20 > Otherwise, the boot loader is not needed. within the DESCRIPTION:=20 > If not using a boot ROM, the guest operating system must be loaded with=20 > bhyveload(8) or a similar boot loader before running bhyve, otherwise, it= =20 > is enough to run bhyve with a boot ROM of choice. Let's not have both. Which of the two paragraphs will be better under DESCRIPTION? --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are on the CC list for the bug.=