From nobody Sun Jun 22 04:32:59 2025 X-Original-To: dev-commits-doc-all@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4bPyxm36Fsz5tDlL for ; Sun, 22 Jun 2025 04:33:00 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R11" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4bPyxl4PR3z3wnx; Sun, 22 Jun 2025 04:32:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1750566779; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=me4VgRRkZHjSciDaPPz0joQryrJUsgCZijlNxA6FUeg=; b=PwEiR73fFCjJLa4VGmiVog+AmcRrVnvDxYoWdBU74klmoOSI9tl+ed0UqaeBEEB/ZA0my1 GXneYlzq6JqLJ8bvLbyipc4wG9qHJNFZBX5sWw2rIb+IbnEd6dg4RCGSb1mMKvncW5QAV4 So/soeAsUtgSbLRvnzTIVvb1TN1czXQGD+3ceSvA7rjhEbaLv/w68DleELCtd6aL9RVxn0 73dFfpdZoul569pfpHHPcQAAn3xjcz7OSMQcS/CSTdwzMykqYhE8He5GWlaa98Sx/jEp5L zBiv4YpKuHfiP5QpCkQ3gvnyjO+xun0YHrlx8ey6ZwGMtoiPdn63nTuOnWi5rQ== ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1750566779; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=me4VgRRkZHjSciDaPPz0joQryrJUsgCZijlNxA6FUeg=; b=yH84DVqamP81g3P3PMH+Z0nw/jc4d7TFjOrKhIcKGekTz3WyumMZeNd3ggChPfS10aTUh/ tBxg1CjQHD6shqfKueiXGsWx10pk25xgry6kCSZup1SCqhugQISSCDg83TrA5jADFolhjm NqSu3emYo/5djnAxL4s59L3lApFBvwz+zFIVOqzVowVLBaRYpYKpdVw8J9shyNosIdJCkM n5UDmJAx99nuYv99MK98MmQ1C9woKehi/t3tY16SlrHMzi5WUaF00+jm9yeygL+Ap8QQMJ NQTQhYpqtbVkw2XXqaWl/XzEOpOeDQ64FSyeTwvdORogLesLMPmCKhTKz4P7PQ== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1750566779; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=Jn80fpijZcnilDENQc6mM7NGWJu3DaNYWJdgo4LoaMwz6T2UFWtIV8baS6IR3MvjDwe2xS /KP47RpcYZfxYnQ/DvuMUGVL/+sAQwhUvSqn8GCtizynfhi0DyCWT7voV2sLD185VfBE8m KMn50Xl/GPe1ne0Bihnwxh20c7PdzA5VH9fZIt6TdiqlZRrJ7QS4snUGoPXLVjbuEz6Sak e5CCj8Hb04H2sPAnOS60Ld7oiM70TYs1tYFHAntqHchpuHetNIsv6ckEniXpKwi1kjSQRC p9GZl4cU3gjCB91MKjie5wp6jrkUbEOQoqWtEWPxhHyiyXnq/LLZG7bLKxQpdw== Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org (gitrepo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:5]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4bPyxl2vk9z12Qy; Sun, 22 Jun 2025 04:32:59 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.44]) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.18.1/8.18.1) with ESMTP id 55M4WxZq014602; Sun, 22 Jun 2025 04:32:59 GMT (envelope-from git@gitrepo.freebsd.org) Received: (from git@localhost) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.18.1/8.18.1/Submit) id 55M4Wx3o014599; Sun, 22 Jun 2025 04:32:59 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Sun, 22 Jun 2025 04:32:59 GMT Message-Id: <202506220432.55M4Wx3o014599@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org From: Colin Percival Subject: git: 76f5a5635a - main - releases: Fix punctuation List-Id: Commit messages for all branches of the doc repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-doc-all List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: X-BeenThere: dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org Sender: owner-dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Git-Committer: cperciva X-Git-Repository: doc X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/main X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Commit: 76f5a5635a23c24c5f4a1031b54f429e9a2a6f3d Auto-Submitted: auto-generated The branch main has been updated by cperciva: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=76f5a5635a23c24c5f4a1031b54f429e9a2a6f3d commit 76f5a5635a23c24c5f4a1031b54f429e9a2a6f3d Author: Colin Percival AuthorDate: 2025-06-22 04:28:20 +0000 Commit: Colin Percival CommitDate: 2025-06-22 04:32:23 +0000 releases: Fix punctuation Nonessential information in a sentence can be set off by preceding *and following* it with commas. While we're here, avoid unnecessarily splitting a sentence across lines. Co-authored-by: Graham Perrin --- website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc | 3 +-- website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc | 3 +-- website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc | 3 +-- website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc | 3 +-- website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +- 11 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc b/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc index 606ebd91b8..ff17469ef5 100644 --- a/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc +++ b/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: More detailed information //, such as release notes -// and hardware notes +// and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: //link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc index 3f722cd9ef..630b04cb2f 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc index 69342ebe9b..82ece08200 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc index 18ae91a057..f484350787 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc @@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes -can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc index 1836ff59e6..3a7f7f2228 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc index d5cce4ca8e..7760e7392b 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc @@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, -can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc index 11a691aa2b..5fa815d2ff 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc index 8be3fd0905..6c93949f60 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc index 30c4f8e6a3..fbf528ceb1 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc @@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, -can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc index b8a2a8a486..dbc3c5bea4 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc @@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, -can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc index 76ebd9328c..54243d1fa3 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: More detailed information //, such as release notes -// and hardware notes +// and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: //link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +