From owner-svn-doc-all@freebsd.org Sat Dec 23 04:43:53 2017 Return-Path: Delivered-To: svn-doc-all@mailman.ysv.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:1900:2254:206a::19:1]) by mailman.ysv.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id D72BAE98476 for ; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 04:43:53 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: from mail-yb0-x230.google.com (mail-yb0-x230.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:4002:c09::230]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client CN "smtp.gmail.com", Issuer "Google Internet Authority G2" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 8939E74F23 for ; Sat, 23 Dec 2017 04:43:53 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from lists@eitanadler.com) Received: by mail-yb0-x230.google.com with SMTP id z11so18670741ybm.1 for ; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 20:43:53 -0800 (PST) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=eitanadler.com; s=0xdeadbeef; h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id :subject:to:cc; bh=9Bz1beBhhTuMdlYJ3FyW7LHiiQ4LLryrtQkd7oKpKjs=; b=j/BcF6INYaWuQl9qZ0xNetWKghw9WcujqSUEgyDGfOaMfJtXCANQKCJ/TLU8R8o/53 My26vGoN6cdpVAk//p19kL7f+UMFb6mMJbO6d3cM8DHRfrxKa4QBo3tWn/803yQlnWtm PuUfjv++u0Ymt0RQgI3uw6HlWtCCIAJn5b6Yc= DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd-org.20150623.gappssmtp.com; s=20150623; h=mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from:date:message-id :subject:to:cc; bh=9Bz1beBhhTuMdlYJ3FyW7LHiiQ4LLryrtQkd7oKpKjs=; b=e8FrBU7evQe3sHsTebahYHHNVPpHtGB0wBaj0Dgp99t7L4Rmf/eplMsKlzjuRvDheZ lFgnut4gVNyqYCzwdEjhy3fkzBMf0nlL8t0GdwM1HHt6aFo+ofwP5IJs6gtzrVeY3Pl5 9u6azq5mFT7vvYaTnf6vLI1HxFwIyjLE7dcIE9BIMgSmAhI93vQD0UXPsMoPQZTp6P0G S8r/SdJUBmXyGeuv7PI6nAA/jVChGmmfYbaUzLFSuttuXogdmtCkyNcAlOnaMD2ehwvO kOXOByaANMBduvBuGHzNrdaRqbXLhtw/V5YdCx6PT38f91cuEDJsxh35Vd+kRfuZQ5u0 h7yA== X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:mime-version:sender:in-reply-to:references:from :date:message-id:subject:to:cc; bh=9Bz1beBhhTuMdlYJ3FyW7LHiiQ4LLryrtQkd7oKpKjs=; b=ddQQvb7tczfPyUaq0lnHcslhyDx3rdmh3aLoiBwdgbvZWVMazJ/eE6Q0vJLcQ3icM4 d5hLYpJL1CZXQnojqGnsUO1aFLTXbmUmC2oupgDWfVJpbP6aun6dThD0+q3xb3d2AySF Hx9D50tJEDHK8lrt2S9p2whubcah7QRfRZ/1AyKVsEMHUc96DGRAjo4RMRfwkEYlUiQL 5ychXiHEHZ2mRBaZA7GzIgySX7klXTT8/1vINON/kAmjEuNdjsrBoD8yK/0XkTRu8TKT fbl0ZJZKAjyz8MnOLuQfxTJsdSuWu3W3YXrHrjdgVyoMx+fx1UCK9lUpN8HAkzkq943M 51dA== X-Gm-Message-State: AKGB3mJ2z4fZOArKAfhb4xhQUUHJlp/nriZUCBOOtaoXyzpzzNTKnmJD kNrlPUs4aP70zU5UtHFL8dNFz5DSjEPMXPLJagQodPdB X-Google-Smtp-Source: ACJfBovBXPcS0SAqRqcMJprdeWUc5myRHkpHeXfM2lYzUb6YstoUZswWNqojIfeG80A/Y8P60QPt0M4QHDcMvixqj6M= X-Received: by 10.37.111.84 with SMTP id k81mr11048081ybc.18.1514004232661; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 20:43:52 -0800 (PST) MIME-Version: 1.0 Sender: lists@eitanadler.com Received: by 10.37.217.21 with HTTP; Fri, 22 Dec 2017 20:43:22 -0800 (PST) In-Reply-To: <20171223042430.GV39477@kduck.kaduk.org> References: <201712221748.vBMHmiUt059300@repo.freebsd.org> <20171223042430.GV39477@kduck.kaduk.org> From: Eitan Adler Date: Fri, 22 Dec 2017 20:43:22 -0800 X-Google-Sender-Auth: OIhmDneO4bOtQPbBAEB0oZOVQJo Message-ID: Subject: Re: svn commit: r51330 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs: ipv6 multimedia portmgr To: Benjamin Kaduk Cc: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" X-BeenThere: svn-doc-all@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.25 Precedence: list List-Id: "SVN commit messages for the entire doc trees \(except for " user" , " projects" , and " translations" \)" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 23 Dec 2017 04:43:53 -0000 On 22 December 2017 at 20:24, Benjamin Kaduk wrote: > On Fri, Dec 22, 2017 at 05:48:44PM +0000, Eitan Adler wrote: >> Author: eadler >> Date: Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 >> New Revision: 51330 >> URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/51330 >> >> Log: >> multiple: fix a few typos >> >> - Duplicate words >> - change -> chance >> - insure -> ensure (this is actually an Americanism, but can confuse >> some people) >> >> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml >> ============================================================================== >> --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 14:48:00 2017 (r51329) >> +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/multimedia/multimedia-input.xml Fri Dec 22 17:48:44 2017 (r51330) >> @@ -13072,7 +13072,7 @@ >> on the system. One of the first problems presented >> to the person who wants to tune the scheduler is >> how to measure the effects of their changes. Simply >> - tweaking the parameters and hoping that that will >> + tweaking the parameters and hoping that will > > This "that that" was correct. I am travelling; can you fix it? I read this a few times. Switched to - tweaking the parameters and hoping that will + tweaking the parameters and hoping that the tweaks will A fun sentence for you: Tim where Jim had had "had had" had had "had"; "had had" had had a better effect on the teacher. -- Eitan Adler Source, Ports, Doc committer Bugmeister, Ports Security teams