From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Sat Jun 30 23:10:06 2007 Return-Path: X-Original-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B486016A421 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:10:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [69.147.83.40]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 7D4C413C465 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:10:06 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4) with ESMTP id l5UNA63O086646 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:10:06 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.13.4/8.13.4/Submit) id l5UNA6Gs086642; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:10:06 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:10:06 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200706302310.l5UNA6Gs086642@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, minimarmot@gmail.com Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [69.147.83.52]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 75A0816A400 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:03:50 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (74-139-211-128.dhcp.insightbb.com [74.139.211.128]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 3885613C489 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:03:50 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: from prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8) with ESMTP id l5UMf8wg001409 for ; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 22:41:09 GMT (envelope-from kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu) Received: (from kaduk@localhost) by prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu (8.13.8/8.13.8/Submit) id l5UMf8lV001408; Sat, 30 Jun 2007 22:41:08 GMT (envelope-from kaduk) Message-Id: <200706302241.l5UMf8lV001408@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2007 22:41:08 GMT From: minimarmot@gmail.com To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: 3.113 Cc: Subject: docs/114174: nit in handbook -- install chapter X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list Reply-To: minimarmot@gmail.com List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2007 23:10:06 -0000 >Number: 114174 >Category: docs >Synopsis: nit in handbook -- install chapter >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Jun 30 23:10:04 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Benjamin Kaduk >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: the phrase ``sum up'' is used as a verb, which, though common usage may accept, is stylistically inconsistent with the rest of the text. >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-hardware.html >Fix: --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 @ -96,7 +96,7 @@ Information about the minimal configuration is available in the Installation Notes on the Release - Information page of the &os; web site. A sum up of + Information page of the &os; web site. A summary of this information is given in the following sections. Depending on the method you choose to install &os;, you may also need a floppy drive, a supported CDROM drive, and in some >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: