From owner-freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Fri May 1 21:30:02 2009 Return-Path: Delivered-To: freebsd-doc@hub.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1B63F106567B for ; Fri, 1 May 2009 21:30:02 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (freefall.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::28]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EA6E88FC22 for ; Fri, 1 May 2009 21:30:01 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from gnats@FreeBSD.org) Received: from freefall.freebsd.org (gnats@localhost [127.0.0.1]) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id n41LU1ko026978 for ; Fri, 1 May 2009 21:30:01 GMT (envelope-from gnats@freefall.freebsd.org) Received: (from gnats@localhost) by freefall.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) id n41LU1FJ026975; Fri, 1 May 2009 21:30:01 GMT (envelope-from gnats) Resent-Date: Fri, 1 May 2009 21:30:01 GMT Resent-Message-Id: <200905012130.n41LU1FJ026975@freefall.freebsd.org> Resent-From: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org (GNATS Filer) Resent-To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Resent-Reply-To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org, Benedict Reuschling Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::34]) by hub.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 12FAB1065675 for ; Fri, 1 May 2009 21:23:36 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (www.freebsd.org [IPv6:2001:4f8:fff6::21]) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id EA5318FC0A for ; Fri, 1 May 2009 21:23:35 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from nobody@FreeBSD.org) Received: from www.freebsd.org (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by www.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3) with ESMTP id n41LNZD8095576 for ; Fri, 1 May 2009 21:23:35 GMT (envelope-from nobody@www.freebsd.org) Received: (from nobody@localhost) by www.freebsd.org (8.14.3/8.14.3/Submit) id n41LNZKW095575; Fri, 1 May 2009 21:23:35 GMT (envelope-from nobody) Message-Id: <200905012123.n41LNZKW095575@www.freebsd.org> Date: Fri, 1 May 2009 21:23:35 GMT From: Benedict Reuschling To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org X-Send-Pr-Version: www-3.1 Cc: Subject: docs/134147: Unclear sentence (perhaps missing a word), suggestions attached X-BeenThere: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.5 Precedence: list List-Id: Documentation project List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 01 May 2009 21:30:02 -0000 >Number: 134147 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Unclear sentence (perhaps missing a word), suggestions attached >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri May 01 21:30:01 UTC 2009 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Benedict Reuschling >Release: 7.2-PRERELEASE >Organization: The FreeBSD German Documentation Project >Environment: FreeBSD atlantis.reuschling.org 7.2-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 7.2-PRERELEASE #18: Thu Apr 23 22:00:35 CEST 2009 root@atlantis.reuschling.org:/tank/obj/usr/src/sys/ATLANTIS i386 >Description: The following sentence in the FAQ seems to be missing a word or should be rephrased around the word "causes": "There is a known problem when enabling &intel; Enhanced SpeedStep from the BIOS causes the kernel to start printing calcru messages like this:" I have attached three suggestions on how to make the sentence more clear. >How-To-Repeat: Read the sentence and try to make sense of it as it is. >Fix: Apply one of the following diffs to make the sentence more complete/understandable. Suggestion 1: --- book.sgml.orig 2009-05-01 23:04:42.092926621 +0200 +++ book.sgml 2009-05-01 23:05:15.349031797 +0200 @@ -3871,7 +3871,7 @@ - There is a known problem when enabling &intel; Enhanced + A known problem when enabling &intel; Enhanced SpeedStep from the BIOS causes the kernel to start printing calcru messages like this: Suggestion 2: --- book.sgml.orig 2009-05-01 23:04:42.092926621 +0200 +++ book.sgml 2009-05-01 23:07:28.640448164 +0200 @@ -3872,7 +3872,7 @@ There is a known problem when enabling &intel; Enhanced - SpeedStep from the BIOS causes the kernel to start printing + SpeedStep from the BIOS. It causes the kernel to start printing calcru messages like this: calcru: runtime went backwards from 6 usec to 3 usec for pid 37 (pagezero) Suggestion 3: --- book.sgml.orig 2009-05-01 23:04:42.092926621 +0200 +++ book.sgml 2009-05-01 23:08:27.557631772 +0200 @@ -3872,7 +3872,7 @@ There is a known problem when enabling &intel; Enhanced - SpeedStep from the BIOS causes the kernel to start printing + SpeedStep from the BIOS, which causes the kernel to start printing calcru messages like this: calcru: runtime went backwards from 6 usec to 3 usec for pid 37 (pagezero) Patch attached with submission follows: --- book.sgml.orig 2009-05-01 23:04:42.092926621 +0200 +++ book.sgml 2009-05-01 23:08:27.557631772 +0200 @@ -3872,7 +3872,7 @@ There is a known problem when enabling &intel; Enhanced - SpeedStep from the BIOS causes the kernel to start printing + SpeedStep from the BIOS, which causes the kernel to start printing calcru messages like this: calcru: runtime went backwards from 6 usec to 3 usec for pid 37 (pagezero) >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: