Date: Thu, 20 Jun 2013 15:32:15 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r41965 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer Message-ID: <201306201532.r5KFWF4g070330@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Thu Jun 20 15:32:15 2013 New Revision: 41965 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41965 Log: Include recent years in copyright notice, remove some uses of "you" in introduction, add suggestion about corrections and additions. Remove the part about sections that are not complete being marked with a star, there are none. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml Thu Jun 20 14:58:27 2013 (r41964) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/book.xml Thu Jun 20 15:32:15 2013 (r41965) @@ -70,15 +70,14 @@ <para>Thank you for becoming a part of the FreeBSD Documentation Project. Your contribution is extremely valuable.</para> - <para>This primer covers everything you will need to know in - order to start contributing to the FreeBSD Documentation - Project, from the tools and software you will be using (both + <para>This primer covers details needed + to start contributing to the FreeBSD Documentation + Project, from the tools and software (both mandatory and recommended) to the philosophy behind the Documentation Project.</para> - <para>This document is a work in progress, and is not complete. - Sections that are known to be incomplete are indicated with a - <literal>*</literal> in their name.</para> + <para>This document is a work in progress. Corrections and + additions are welcomed.</para> </abstract> </bookinfo>
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